Isn't It Funny How You Broke My Heart?

ISNT IT FUNNY HOW SHES ALWAYS THERE WHEN I TURN AROUND AND WHEN I TAKE A BUS AND ISNT IT FUNNY HOW SHES ALWAYS THERE WHEN I WANT TO CRY AND YOU THINK IM JUST MAKING A FUSS ISNT IT FUNNY HOW SHES ALWAYS THERE WHEN I LOOK AND TOUCH MY SKIN AND ISNT IT FUNNY HOW SHES ALWAYS THERE WHEN SOMEONE ASKS ME HOW IVE BEEN ISNT IT FUNNY HOW SHES ALWAYS THERE AS I STICK A FINGER DOWN MY THROAT AND ISNT IT FUNNY HOW SHES ALWAYS THERE EVEN WHEN I SMOKE ISNT IT FUNNY HOW SHES ALWAYS THERE WHEN SOMEONE SAYS IM BEAUTIFUL AND ISNT IT FUNNY HOW SHES ALWAYS THERE WHEN I SAY IM THE SAME AS USUAL ISNT IT FUNNY HOW SHES ALWAYS THERE WHEN I ASK FOR A DRINK AND ISNT IT FUNNY HOW SHES ALWAYS THERE WHEN I START TO THINK

Author's Note

This sounds like the inner monologue of a teenage girl because it is. Meant to be read angrily which is why I didn't use punctuation. Please let me know what you think in honesty!

Reviews

[rowan.taylorrr]

I love this, inner thoughts became understood on my part and made me understand the words

[Katerina Grev]

Thank you so much!

[emmajoy]

I wonder if the word FUNNY could be exchanged by STRANGE? Also maybe you might repeat whichever word is used a couple of times now and again to suggest a mind in turmoil.. perhaps

ISN'T IT FUNNY, YES, YES.. FUNNY..

There is so much raw emotion in your writing, it's incredibly powerful..especially those final few words. And they in turn set off the reader's thoughts.. ..

[Katerina Grev]

Thanks for the feedback, really interesting suggestions! I really appreciate the kind words!