The Room

scary type, expresses i want it to seem scary but im not that good so yea

The new house. Just as nasty as the old one, but mother says Grandma gave us a thousand dollars to fix it up. At least I get to decorate my room the way I wanna. Green base paint with black splattered across the wall, and an orange shag carpet.... Lovely. I haven't seen my room yet but i have seen the out side of the house. We finished fixing the house on Monday but we ran out of money so we have to wait for the paint.

"OK lets go see your rooms and Josh, you get the bigger room since you have a bigger dresser and bed. And Cassie, you get the other one."

"Ha-ha sis! You get the smaller one!"

"Mom! He's moving in a year any way! Why don't I get it!?"

"Knock it off you two! I understand but that's our final word." Their mother argued."Go inside. I'll be in in a minute."

Me and my brother walked inside the ugly blue house. It was average. Descent  size living room. Big bathroom. Every bed room was at the end of the hall. One large. One big. And one with a closed door.The large one was blue and chipped. The big one was white with a dead rat in it. And the last, I tried to open the door but, it wouldn't move.

"Mom! My door won't open!"

"OK come here i got the key." Cassie ran to her mother.

"Here" Cassie's mother handed her the key. "Careful. we haven't been in your room much so I don't know whats in there."

"Then how did you fix it up?" Cassie was a bit confused now.

"Oh we hired workers to fix up the bed rooms. Me and your father just did the bathroom and living room. And your grandparents fixed the kitchen."

"Oh." Cassie went and unlocked her door when it opened, the smell of decay blew in her face and cloud of black ash pounded her in the face.

"EWWWW!!!!!!!"Cassie screamed.

Her mother rushed in there screaming and thinking that something happened to her 13 year old girl.

"What! What! What!" her mother rushed.

"Do you smell that?"

"OH MY GOSH!"

"It's nasty!"

"Don't worry we will get it cleaned up and fixed." Her mother promised. She went and got some fa-breeze and sprayed the whole room, but even that didn't do much."Start vacuuming so we can get your bed in here." Her mother hissed. Cassie vacuumed her small room and sticking up from one of the corners of carpet was a small piece of paper."What's this?" She thought to her self. Cassie unfolded it and found some writing on it. "Beware of my room! I have put a curse on this hellhole. Sleep in it one night, you'll hear things. Sleep in it twice, I'll kill one of your family member's. Sleep in it a third and I'll kill you!" Cassie was stunned. "It's just a lie. A joke." She thought. "Mom! I'm done." Cassie slipped the note in one of her pocket's of her black skinny jeans. Her dark purple shirt hanging loose around her. Cassie had the normal Williams looks, that's their last name. She has the long brown hair. Pail blue eyes, and a straight nose. Tall, slender build. She is tall for her age. Five foot, seven inches.

       "George! We need to get Cassie's bed in her room." Mother insisted.

"I'm kinda helping Josh with his at the moment." He screeched.

"It cant be that important. We need to do it now." She begged.  

"Just wait a minute! Don't make me hit you again!"Her father is a woman abuser. She cries every night because of it.

"Yes dear! Sorry dear!" Shes only with him by force. 

          When they got her bed in she laid down and closed her eyes.

When she woke up, it was seven p.m. She looked over and saw a little black hole in the middle of the floor. She walked over to it and the carpet disappeared. All that was there was the original room, that was when the little girl that killed her self lived there. 

Chipped pink walls with writing all over the walls. A plain wooden floor. Cassie looked at the writing. "F*** the phone, Kill that b****," and all kinds of crazy! "How old was she?" Cassie turned around and every thing of her's was gone. All that was there was a pink blanket on the floor and a small wooden table with a box on it. She walked over and opened it. A whole box filled with papers with her name on it. Xena Walt. A picture, face down, was laying there. Cassie flipped it and screamed. Her mother and father rushed in, her mother half naked, screaming from the site of their child.

       When Cassie flipped the photo, a hand came and grabbed her face and ripped her whole face off.When she screamed every thing turned back the same, except her face. Her father called the police and they found nothing, no clue of what happened.

"We'll take her to the hospital." One fat officer said to the crying parents."But she might not live."

  

Reviews

[Imaginator]

wow, i was totally creeped out at the end, i didn't expect that at all. and if anyone got hurt, I thought it would've been another person because of the letter

[Sarah Hime (PokemonFan#..]

A dark, spooky write......O.O But I liked it any way! ^w^ Keep it up!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i love this write's straightforwardness...

[-musicfunk-]

seriously wonderful..

[Che]

Oh...Good one...though i do not deserve to judge but still gave whatever i fell like...given your age,you write pretty good descriptions.

[smarie]

wooooaahhhhhh this was spooky!! but I liked it lol great story!

[Hachamecha]

:)
I ripped your face, cause you wouldn't leave....
Cassie "WTF?! B****, I have an abusive father! Don't make me use my awesome strenth against you!"
Ghost: D:

[∂αʌ<..]

spoooooooooky this one! fabulous!

[Bridget Murphy]

Creepy, won't get any sleep tonight!!

[paparapapa]

That gave me goosebumps. It was really scary. Great write! ;)