Love or Lust?

i have had this feeling for a guy i really liked but every thing was ruined from a certain some one i will not name.

Every day I stare.

You don't know,

that i think about you.

When I go home,

I write about you.

 

Your hair,

long, wavy and blond.

Your eyes,

sparkling in the day.

Your smile,

filling me with happyness.

 

You don't notice me,

I hope you know I'm here.

I first saw you,
and I wish it never ended.

Was it love?

Or just lust?

Reviews

[Hachamecha]

:D
*my invisioning of you*
Oh my god, he's hot, makes me happy... wait a second.. (thinker's pose) do I love im... or is it just those stupid girly hormones... .oh well... MUST WRITE A POEM BOUT IT!!!!
-and that was my invisioning. I know this is not what happened, and love does crazy things to you. Would you love him if you could only see his soul? That's the only way to truly know.

[C.A.Jordon]

i like it its simple. the imagery is well done as well. it could use a meta phor ora simile but besides that its good.

[Sashalee]

I'm pretty sure everyone asks this question lol great poem

[Myself]

i really like it it shows that you do still care for him

[Naomi]

I like this(: Adolescent confusion between love and lust. We all experience this at one time or another.

[Sarah Hime (PokemonFan#..]

I have the...well sorta, same experience? I don't know....I think so. Beautiful poem. It was a very well written and magnificent poem.
Keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

Old saying from some old rock song. Love and hate is a heart beat a part. Same goes with love and lust. Each words are different. Love is forever. Lust come and can go very quickly. Always good to walk slow and easy into love. I like the desire and the questions raised by this poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[MetBySunlight]

Blah don't worry about boys till college D:
This poem is not horrible, it's every good (: Captures your emotion quite nicely in a way that the reader can feel it too.

[paparapapa]

Pretty simple but sums up what you feel perfectly. I think lust is just a desire for his body. But if you want everything about him, then that definitely isn't lust anymore. :) it could be love or just infatuation. Good luck assessing how you feel. It always is a tricky thing. ;)

[-musicfunk-]

..pathetic yet true..

[smarie]

You captured the feeling of confusion very well. Great poem!