Tiny Little Semna

Tiny Little Semna

A Chapter by Kit Cat
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Give all your hope! idk...

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With my name being Semna Dem Hope, I get told to have more hope then normal.... And Its annoying...
         I'm just as normal as the next girl. But.... Well... I don't know how to explain it in simple manner... I guess it all started when I was four.
        My mother, Jane, was a normal human, and my father, he was different. When I was a baby, my folks were going through a divorce and Me and my brother were learning to grow up, in a different way. After the divorce, we lived with our mother, and only visited our dad on the weekends. When I turned four, Mother said I had to live with my father. No questions were to be asked. I had fun there,  but I missed my brother, Dane. He HAD to live with mom. I loved it with my dad. And one day, a big change happened.

A four year old. That's all I was. Tiny, very tiny. Almost the size of a fat cat. Tinier then I should be. I only weighted twenty-five pounds. When I was four, my father told me that I was different then any one, or thing. I was special. I grew at slow rates, but I leaned at a fast pace. I  could run as fast as a bullet being shot, with out getting tired. And the best of all, I can't get hurt. I get scratches, but they heal right then. And the age of four, was the time it starts for my kind. He told me this and I thought it was cool. He told me that I can't tell anyone. Not even Dane. Mother knew, but she didn't know the story Father told me. The story was the beginning of time (or so he says)
      As the universe formed, the first sun appeared, with a tiny planet, with single cell organisms. As the first living things, they are more advanced then humans are today. After we got bigger, and the planet stayed small, it got crowded. We started to develop space crafts. By this time, humans were beginning to evolve. All the sightings and drawings and every thing about a floating object, was us. And when they said we were much taller then human, it's mainly because we grow our whole lives, we never stop, and that's why we are tiny, at first. And the people that visited earth, were our oldest people. Our people live to be up to a thousand in human years. So we get pretty tall. Up to ten feet. Once we found out that we could survive on earth, we brought people there. And were not called people, were called Hallens. We were a bit tired of how stupid some of the "cavemen" people were so we taught them of fire, and from there they evolved better, but not in the right manner. We wanted them pure and nature like, but they turned the wrong way. Factory's and pollution. Most of us got very sick and left. But the one's who were born there stayed. They were used to it. We started earth.

After this I was a bit scared. "But that means I will live longer then mommy and Dane!" I didn't like the fact of leaving my family to die.
"Don't worry, Dane has some of me in him. He will probably live and extra three hundred years." He tried to comfort me the best he could. But failed.
"Still not long enough and mommy!" I wished I didn't have this problem the deal with.
"Ok yes, but you will be fine." He looked worried. "Honey, I have to tell you something. Um ,well we have to go to our planet, planet Gooler. " He wished he didn't have to tell me this.
"What." I said in a non-questionable way. He looked at me with a sad face.
"Yes. I'll tell you why on our way there." I hoped I didn't have to. Now I was using all my hope.


















© 2011 Kit Cat



Author's Note

Kit Cat
ta-da!

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heehee "ta-da" that phrase always makes me me giggle ^-^ anyway cool beginning hmph all that pollution is destroying my food yeah my apples will never taste the same as before hmph ^~^

Posted 1 Year Ago


You did very well with the opening chapter. Gave history and purpose for the story. I like the girl. You have my attention. I will keep reading . A excellent chapter.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


I think the background's pretty interesting. Pretty good start and quite intriguing. Just a few minor errors like spelling mistakes, and I think you could lessen the use of "..." by putting commas instead. Anyway, keep on writing. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Yay!
I like this.
I expect more great work from you ;)

Posted 1 Year Ago


its nice well done

Posted 1 Year Ago


This sounds like it's going to be a good story. You have a nice plot going so far. Keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


This sounds very interesting. I'd love to continue reading as long as you keep me updated. Be aware that since the narrator is of the girl, she can not say how anyone else feels about a certain thing, only about what they LOOK like they feel. She can not enter their thoughts, only hers. Other than that, this seems very good with a great plot-line in the making. Well done, honestly.

Posted 1 Year Ago


that was a great beginning! I like how you made the story of the beginning your OWN, as far as i could tell, at least :D

Posted 1 Year Ago



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