Thanks to you

to my 'friend' who is constantly mean to me and criticizing me. even though she isn't on here, this is for you, jessica.

Constant pain.

Thanks to you.

Bad temper.

Thanks to you.

Anger.

Thanks to you.

Hatred.

Thanks to you.

Seen as pathetic.

Thanks to you.

 

The elastic’s about to snap, sis.

And when it does,

You caused it.

You pulled it as far as it could.

You didn’t think.

 

I’m about to snap, sis.

Thanks to you.

Reviews

[Emunah June.]

Wow! Awesome!

[Ian]

Well, it's and interesting poem since you dedicated it to a "friend"...
Though it's short I really like it.
Very powerful and straight poem...
Great write!