I love you

                   Friendship started with you and me

                   But now the light makes me see

                   Something tells me we'll never part

                   By the smile that warms my restless heart

                   Never could I tell you how I felt

                   Not until the day I got down and knelt

                   Simple, true words we said

                   And sooner than I knew, we were wed

                   And now I know we'll always be together 

                   Both now and forever

                    Boy, am I glad you said, "I do"

                    Now I hope you see how much I truly love you

Reviews

[White-Inked Pen]

Aww so sweet and innocent! and wow grats for winning first place!
this was added to my fav list :)

[Tasha]

This was sweet. You speak as if you are a lot older than 12, you truly have a way with words. :)

[Sunny Skye]

good job!
Congrats you have won 1st place!!!

[Murtuza]

This poem is very sweet. You've taken the point of view as the boy who is deeply in love with the girl he wants to marry and in the end they live happily ever after. Its a heartfelt poem and has definitely touched mine. Good job!

[C. Porter]

Aww, very sweet:) It's like honey; slow, sweet, innocent. Perfect.

[thoughts of jade]

this is just so cute and lovely...

[J Michael Simmonds]

I really love this. It's straight and to the point. I love this!

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Something tells me we'll never part
By the smile that warms my restless heart

Such tender loving words! So Awesome!

[Laura Grace]

Very sweet and very cute:) good write.

[Blue Eyes]

this is really warm hearting to me!