Eternity

A Poem on Heaven and what I can imagine it to be like. Dedicated to Jesus. :)

All those tears

I cried

All the pain

Inside

So suddenly

It all went away

Like Jesus said

On that very day

When there He was!

A face of light

All was happy

All was bright

Trumpets were blasted

Sin was no more

People were singing

"Praise the Lord!"

Eternity's here

Christ has won

Shout and cheer

To the Holy One

Reviews

[Poet's World]

This poem was very much dedicated, heartfelt, sincere, devoted and in deep faith, i liked this poem...

[Erinne S.]

This was beautiful and heartfelt! Loved it!

~Erinne

[Karli Janelle]

This is so beautiful, in such a simple, pleasant way. Your expression is terrific.

Good job! As always:)

[Blue Eyes]

I Love this! Great job :)

[Murtuza]

Another lovely poem of yours that I like. Nice job :)

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

extremely love, and amazing!!!! I could totally tell it came from the heart!!! fabulous poem!!!

[♪Chels♪]

A very lovely poem Kelly, personally I think one of your best.
When it comes to writing things praising God I don't think it really matters, about the quality as long as it's from the heart. So don't worry about the rhythm.
A very true poem, I know when I cry and feel so broken God always gives me the strength to carry on.
I agree, we must just keep on praising him. He's the light and the only way to go! =)
A very beautiful poem!