Submissive

Submissive

A Poem by kayla

To be your little girl

is all I could ever want,

to kneel at your feet

and proclaim my submission.

To be dominated by my master

is my ultimate wish,

your collar around my neck

to remind me I am yours.

To be loved and abused

by you whom I trust.

I am your submissive girl,

to you I belong.


© 2012 kayla



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kayla
Please tell me what you think(:

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This poem immediately made me think of 50 Shades of Grey, Darker and Freed. I love it. "To be loved and abused" my favorite line...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing, that all I gotta say ^_^
100/100

Posted 6 Years Ago


im unfamiliar with the BDSM thing :P so ill avoid that kind of lifestyle. but great piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


kayla

6 Years Ago

lol. thx(:

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Added on July 11, 2012
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Tags: sensual, bdsm, poem

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kayla
kayla

Inland Empire, CA



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I'm between the ages of 15 and 21. I write mostly poetry (but occasionally short stories) about taboo subjects such as societal and political problems, mental disorders, "odd" sexuality, spirituality,.. more..

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