the Girl Above the Clouds

She removes herself from the situation,

and rises up above the clouds.

She doesn't look back down at the wreckage,

only up at the positively endowed.

She has moved beyond the negativity

and she will show you how.

Just look up at the sky and you'll see her

rising up above the clouds.

Reviews

[Newspaper Skeleton]

Beautiful and sweet. Love the underlying hope.

[Manos]

nice and hopeful!!

[N. Nellan]

I love it. Very inspiring. A needed poem for the women of the struggle, any struggle.

[Kitty Robinson]

this was great!

[Tai]

I can see how the photo could inspire such a piece of poetry. I like how you refer to the area below her as wreckage, well done.

[The White Wolf]

I think it is honestly wonderful. We can all hope to be that kind of girl!

[afra]

awww lovely ...good job sis