The man who owned the world.

The man who owned the world.

A Poem by Vaporvision
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Just an output from my mind to the page.

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There was once a man who owned the world.

All that is known at his feet,

He stood atop a mountain.

There he yelled “all is mine”.

From below, a tiny voice was heard.

It echoed through the mountain.

“But what next?”

The man he pondered

He pondered for hours on end until eventually

He walked down the mountain.

© 2017 Vaporvision


Author's Note

Vaporvision
Judge it how you please. I feel like I could write this differently.

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Taz
This is very intiresting read, I like the feeling you portray of thought and then it seems he gives up because he does not know what to do, well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Vaporvision

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Taz

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This is oddly haunting and very eloquently phrased.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vaporvision

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I tried to make it alike to something like a Chinese proverb.

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Added on April 3, 2017
Last Updated on April 3, 2017
Tags: man, world, owned, poem, poetry, mountain, humble

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Vaporvision
Vaporvision

Burnaby, Canada



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My name is Noah, and I'm 18 years old. I write when I am inspired as a hobby of sorts. A classic romantic, looking for love in places it doesn't belong. I aspire to be a voice actor. more..

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