Will You Be My Valentine?

Valentine's day song

Let me show you how I feel each year

I thought I had nothing to fear

 

I had something to give you

But I left it on the grass of Hilltop Valley

Let's make our story short, feelings real

I'll tell you all my thoughts that I feel

And it won't go away

The mood is just right, I want you to stay...

Will you be mine?

 

Here's my Valentine, Here's my Valentine

I wasted my whole life, trying to make you mine

You're my Valentine, You're my Valentine

You never came back to me

Will you be mine?

 

And then if I can't find you

I'll check the darkened coast and the city skyline

So let's paint the big picture now

I'll tell you just when I'm feeling down

And it won't go away

The mood is just right, I want you to stay...

Will you be mine?

 

Here's my Valentine, Here's my Valentine

I wasted my whole life, trying to make you mine

You're my Valentine, You're my Valentine

You never came back to me

Will you be mine?

 

You make my heart stop, you make my heart stop

It's not my fault your such a heart throb

You make heart beat, you make my heart beat again...

I won't stop until you are mine

I'll never stop even when the darkness blinds me

This day, the fourteenth of February, I can't wait.

And it won't go away

The mood is just right, I want you to stay...

Will you be mine? Will you be mine?

 

Here's my Valentine, Here's my Valentine

I wasted my whole life, trying to make you mine

You're my Valentine, You're my Valentine

You never came back to me

Will you be mine?

 

Reviews

[A. Star]

wow...I really liked it =]

[ah]

good write, i enjoyed it, thanks for asking me to read it, keep writing

[Touché Armada]

Well I thought that even though I'd like to murder cupid tis not your fault those arrows are like poison, sooo why not just comment and not feel so bitter.. Hey would you like a pistachio nut or two? Mind the shells� Ok enough blabber. First "story short, feelings real', to me that doesn't sit well it almost like well that was nice intense all of that but I want to kill you now or something.. Do you see what im saying? If you want to make the feels real wouldn't you want that story long and never ending? The other thing is a life wasted pursuing what you want? I mean the same could be said for that cool million so many people want, but would you be bitter toward the cash? That line just sounds a little bitter to me. perhaps it would be better to say, I feel no waste in spending my whole life trying to make you mine, and I'd spend all my next lifetimes trying to make you mine, till you come back to me.. Any how it is that time of year I suppose.. It's not a bad write. Hope your 14th is good to you.

[Martin L.]

pretty good. and I would prefer "I wan you to say," :-P lol