Beautiful spirit

Your caramel kisses ever the sweetest

  your lips

   The color of raspberry

  Glamour

   Their touch soft as creme

  Irresistible as red velvet cake

 Earth and Heaven mix

Swirls of the finest silk of the soul

 Your aura makes me float in the air

  oh-soo-much fun

   Our licentious craze

    Bursting into flames

   Hypnotically fire erupts in water within

  Connection

 Our minds fill with passion

Eternity

  Drunk off the endless flow of wine

    Rushing through our veins

     Embodying infinite wisdom and more

     Your eyes burn like globes of fire

    So hot they melt polar ice

   Something rises in me

 Beneath the XXTCc of your gaze 

  My intuition penetrates deeply 

   Into your candy color soul

 LOVE

A soul that shines hotter than blue blazes

 Revealing the deepest treasure

  Sacred worlds

   Queen of goddesses your brilliance is consuming flames

     Scorching this entire universe

    Pure

     The crystal voice of spirits drips off your tongue

    Ethereal butterflies flow through your music

   Gods enter me 

  I ripple in the sea of twilight

  Entering dreams

 Everynight

  I take your smile and run into the arms of heaven

   We are harmony and bliss

    We are forever 

  

Reviews

[_mal]

This is beautiful, the way you've laid this out is unique and really adds to it

[Alexandria Reece]

'Hypnotically fire erupts in water within
Connection
Our minds fill with passion
Eternity
Drunk off the endless flow of wine
Rushing through our veins'

You are so talented! I really like that little segment above especially. I think this has the most fantastic flow I've encountered all year! It's rushing in places and as a sweet fragrance gently flowing along in others, but you never even see the transition between the two, it's so smooth! This made me feel warm and all of the emotions invested and interpreted were so real! Thank you for sharing your brilliance here!

[MOON]

You have a lovely style , this is a lyrical write and I love the line the crystal voice of spirits drip off your tongue.