psycho-babble

Grip

Slowly

Squeeze

Drain

Liquid

Brains

Eyes pop out

Bursting 

  Kaleido 

  Vision

Rollin g nilloR

Yummy

   Delicious

OOze for Brains

    lucy

   Skeletons

Rock 'N' Roll 

    Lemon 'N' Sour

       Acid and XTC

   Colliding 

Candy flipping

    In our heads

Reviews

[Joℏn / Jack / Turtle ..]

Nice, seems like an allusion between tripping and really hot self pleasuring

[Callista-Jade]

Oh I love the title! Haha love your choice of words. The backwards "Rolling", just genius. Really unique. Short and playful piece. Nice!

[Trigorin]

An interesting little 'association' poem, or at least that's how it came across to me. There's definitely a good and loaded topic you've chosen with this, and I like how you've decided to present this poem. Some of your words are very visceral and conjure up a specific, vivid image, regardless of the actual brevity of the poem. One thing I would question would be a few of your word choices - some of it borders on the vulgar, and while I do agree that that is an envelope that was made to be pushed, there is still quite a lot to be said for good taste.
I especially like what you've done in line 11 with the palindromic quality of the line. I normally don't approve of playing games with formatting but in this case it works very well for you, and contributes to the overall feel of the piece. Very good work.

[Deeper La'jik]

Thank you man for your review and insight. I'm glad you appreciate this poem!!