Who is human?????

Who is human?????

A Poem by riddhi
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This poem is all about what i think and believe in......

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One day a little girl was asked,
What in future she wanted?
She gave a very sweet answer,
She wants to be humane not a human and nothing more.

                                    Pay to this a little more attention,
                                    Then definitely, sadness in your life will have no mention.

Tell me,
Who is a human?
The one who belongs to 
the species Homo sapiens.
Who is a human?
The one who becomes happy
by hurting others.

                                    Tell me,
                                    Who is a human?
                                     The one who runs  only behind money.
                                     forgetting all the ethics and morals.
                                     Who is a human?
                                      The one who lives and earns
                                      only for his family and not for his nation.
  
Please do tell me,
A human is the one who 
lives and let others live.
The one who thinks that his ability,
can be used for welfare of other organisms too.
The one who before thinking his benefit,
thinks about others.

                                      Yes, he is a human.
                                      The most beautiful creation of god,
                                       who can turn ugly anytime , anywhere..........................




© 2015 riddhi



Author's Note

riddhi
I hope you like my poem and you also agree with me about this.....

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Hahaha, yeah I agree with your poem, i guess not every human is the same but almost everyone are....
Thank you again for sharing..:)

Posted 9 Months Ago


riddhi

9 Months Ago

Thank you...
I love it . it's a very different poem I must say !!!
Your creativety is very excellent !!!
Superb work

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for spending your precious time in reading my poem
zunie frost

1 Year Ago

welcome !!!
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The typical mind of human is grown by the influence of history itself..as in the theory of Darwin , a species have to struggle and run to save its sign on this competitive world...But now those pressure of saving its species is over but human forget it and get in the race more violently only to seek a power or position but forget to save its most essential quality ,called "Humanity"
A very nice message is blown over here..
I like it and thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Yes,actually humans have forgot humanity and i am glad that you liked this poem....
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I understand that poem completely.

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thank you...
very nice poem,but u can add some more good examples .but in all ur ppoem has gave a very good message

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for viewing...
Definitely can relate to this. Definitely makes you think. Thank you for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow.. this is very relate able, as this is something i think of very often. You've done a superb job of realism.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much...
great attempt.......
again, mature themes.......will great insights.......
i liked it!!!
:)
p.s. line 6 from the end
maybe "beings" sound better than organisms........just my opinion......


Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reviewing...
A poem that sees through human nature - the difference between being 'human' and 'humane' nicely versed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reviewing...
Oh, my god!
I think, you have a treasure of thoughts & you used it very well.
This poem is not just remarkable of yours but It's more than that.
you mention that in your poem about humanity is bitter, But It's a bitter truth of our humans.
Your poem makes a work to see a real face of us in a mirror of truth. This poem can create a big impact on the community. I liked & agree that your last lines in your poem.

Yes, he is a human.
the beautiful creation of god,
who can turn ugly anytime, anywhere?

It seems different. Hats off to you for this!


Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reviewing and i am happy you liked it....
Akki

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome!

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