Year 3016

Year 3016

A Poem by riddhi

A story of future world this is,
100 years from now in 3016 this story's place is.
100 years from today,
In 3016 there will be only black days.
Machines won't be controlled by us,
But we would be controlled my machines.

An old man of 3016 says remembering his childhood,
That there used to be trees with beautiful logs of wood.
There used to be a place for sentiments and feelings ,
there used to be bond between humans like siblings.

He continues by telling his present in 3016 ,
That no human has trust on each other and think each other mean.
They have no beautiful environment and nature ,
which will be seen and enjoyed happily by old and mature.

To breathe, there is no fresh air ,
for poisonous gases rich industrialists don't care.
Everywhere there is only destruction ,
True relation has nowhere its foundation for construction.

Then he curses his ancestors of 2016 ,
saying them mad and mean.
Says this 3016 punishment ,
was their testament.

They paved the way for destruction ,
they were cause of this bad condition.
They used resources unlimitedly ,
They harmed mother nature recklessly.

They sowed the seeds of fragile relation ,
by fighting with other nation.
They never preferred peace but always war ,
sufferers the people of 3016 are.

Hey , friends just one last question ,
Do you all want in 3016 such condition?
Then please do reform yourself ,
from curses of your descendants in 3016 you can protect yourself.


Adopt a witful approach towards environment ,
Not only for fulfilling ones selfish needs human life is meant.
At least care about your future generation ,
Do not fight with other nation....



© 2016 riddhi



Author's Note

riddhi
This is a poem which i wanted to write since many days and Yeah finally i have done it..Share with me what do you think about it.....

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Awesome work, But here's another side to it, a scientific one, By the time we reach 3000 AD we will be a type 3 civilization, essentially drawing energy frm the entire milky way and we will be capable of interstellar travel and who knows we might leave the earth for another home out in the cosmos :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


riddhi

8 Months Ago

Ya!! This can also happen what we can do is to hope that whatever happens is good....
SSR

3 Months Ago

Dude you are so wrong its type 2 civilization not type 3



Type II: A s.. read more
I don't want my children or my grandchildren to live in this condition...
Very nice writing with full of emotions and truths...

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reviewing ....i am happy you liked it....
Fascinating write! Makes you think and delve, not just about the future but present. Tyfs :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thank you...
Cyprian Van Dyke

1 Year Ago

Most welcome!
Mahi sain(Mahesh)

8 Months Ago

amazing written.
I also waited for this type poem.
thnx for share
this is incredible!!! such meaning! it's a massive eye-opener to what's happening around us, and really no does seem to care. chemicals get released into the air and no one takes notice and we war on each other because of skin, race, culture and religion. It's so sad, but horridly true.

You've done an incredible work with this piece of poetry, well done!! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Sorry its you not you
riddhi

1 Year Ago

Sorry i meant by my first comment where by mistake i wrote ypu instead of you...
PenguinEmpiress

1 Year Ago

That's okay :)
amazingly written keep it up !!

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thank you..
cherryblossom

1 Year Ago

welcome :)
Awesome. We need more stuff like this. I especially liked the quote, 'he continues by telling his present in 3016.' Thought it was a very interesting way to say that.

Namaste,
-John

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your kind words and that is really so sweet of you of saying namaste,i am an indian so i.. read more
Its a great sentiment and wonderfully done. Truthful and necessary

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reviewing....
One thousand year!

but I like the way you questioned

Hey , friends just one last question ,Do you all want in 3016 such condition?Then please do reform yourself ,from curses of your descendants in 3016 you can protect yourself.

interesting read





Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your kind words.....
There are a significant number syntactic blunders which but when we talk about poetry...its always okay to ignore them
There's an awesome notion behind your poem and you address a major, essential subject and the subject is well addressed.
One more thing, it will take us 1000 years to get to 3016 not 100. You should change that...a lot of reviewers have pointed it out.
I enjoyed the concept and the flow was nice...well penned

Posted 1 Year Ago


I enjoyed this very much. Only issue is that 3016 is 1000 years from now, not 100. But other than that slight error, it was great. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your kind words...

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