A LETTER TO TERRORISTS - THE  MURDERERS OF PEACE

A LETTER TO TERRORISTS - THE MURDERERS OF PEACE

A Poem by riddhi
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A reaction to Nice attack of France.....

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Shedding the blood of innocent ,
is what happened in France in recent.
Many in Bangladesh you slaughtered ,
many innocents you murdered.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is.

Sad is the thing you get happiness by killing ,
you get happiness by blood shedding.
You are not a human ,
You are more than even a demon.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is.

Can you tell me what was the mistake ?
of the people whose lives you take.
Can you tell me what problem you had?
That terror missions you always laid.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is .

Merciless killing is what you like ,
making thousands of kids orphan by killing their parents is what you like.
Spreading hatredness is what you like ,
seeing the flood of blood of innocents is what you like.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is .

You are not the culprit of only those who were killed ,
you are the culprit of all Muslims whose soul you killed.
Allah never gets happy by seeing the graves of his children You made every person look with a vision of hate to a Muslim.
Because of a handful of you ,
whole Islam religion's respect and glory is destroyed by you
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is .

You did a sin against humanity ,
You kill all with a vast rapidity ,
But mind you the world will not listen ,
but put your hatredness in prison .
Killing you is a very easy death ,
And you are not worth of it ,
What you think by killing people you can rule this world ??
If you are thinking so , your ambition is in mud.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is.

Do you want this world under your rule?????
RULE , RULE the barren world , RULE !!!!
Because no human will accept your rule.
Do you want this world under your rule?????
RULE , RULE the soil  , air and water RULE!!!
Because even , birds and plants won't accept your rule.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is.

You think you won by killing people everywhere ??
Let me tell you the stupidity you have is rare.
I will not do the mistake by saying you an animal ,
Because the language of love and peace is known even by an animal.
Terror is what you like ,
But mind you, the day is not far when all of your lives will be on a permanent strike.
A letter to the terrorists this is ,
A letter to the murderers of peace this is...............




© 2016 riddhi



Author's Note

riddhi
This was what i wrote after the recent attack in Nice , France and also to the attack which happened in a cafe of Bangladesh....I hope you all like it.....

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I didn't like the opening two paragraphs. I felt that it was a rather ambiguous and slow start. I was about the third and fourth para didn't appeal much to me either, just as I was about to close the poem; I noticed the last two paragraphs: Both of which absolutely floored me. WOW.

Yes, terrorists would only be ruling a barren land as no human would be ready to occupy it.
Even animals and plants advocate peace in their own way. But, Let me tell you, there is rampant violence and slaughter even in the animal kingdom. Watch a few NAT GEO documentaries on lions and their pedigree to understand what I mean.

Also, I feel it is unfair to Muslims and Islam as a religion to be the only one associated with terror. There is a certain section in their ideology which is misinterpreted. THis Misinterpretation is what is causing all this violence. If you had seen 'My name is Khan'. There is a certain scene which addresses this head on.

I could feel the wrath in your voice, this poem is one written from the heart. I appreciate that.
Keep writing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reviewing and i assure you that i will definitely try to improve more in my next writing... read more



Reviews

Dear,
This is so much! So much of evil things. Your anger and feelings for your people is best exemplified in your lines. I'm so glad to know that we're standing together for an important cause. But I'm equally disappointed while thinking of our dark fate!

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thank you sandra for standing with me for such an important issue...Thank you so much...
Sandra Nair

1 Year Ago

Pleasure! Hope all is well.
I loved this it was passionate and it reached to your heart your anger great write

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thank you...I am happy you liked it....
annalysiar

1 Year Ago

You're more than welcome
Murderers of peace have been around since the beginning of time leading us to shake our head in despair. What a messed up species we are.
Thanks for sharing your poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thank you......
Simple style yet powerful words. You have expressed the anger and helplessness that many of us feel. Writing is a language in itself to vent your feelings and anger....good job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thank you Durango for your review....
Rhiddi,
Terrorism is mind boggling to peaceful and caring people of the world. Such a waste of human life and resources it is beyond understanding. You did a great job describing your feelings. You are a young student of the world yet you have more wisdom than the adult,educated terroist leaders. You have a good heart.

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review... And I am really happy that you liked my poem....
don't be so angry on them, don't think as they think for us, it will let their mission accomplish. They've lost their way, but one day they'll realize it. But, the wrong thing is, that day the new terrorism will begin. A new villain will rise.

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Yes you are correct that the day this will end new terrorism will rise but every problem has its so.. read more
We live in saddening times...your voice is strong and I feel the passion and conviction here Riddhi...never lose your voice, the world needs strong people more than ever :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your review and yes you are right that the world needs strong people more than eve.. read more
Very strong words and very apt to the circumstances...there are little bit of mistakes in tenses, but that happens in a flow...its good to see someone thinking so hard and presenting the anguish in such a way... a very nice read overall.... good one

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thank you i am happy you liked it and i will try to improve my grammatical errors as you said about.. read more
unfortunately you can't get through to fanatics, they are brainwashed beyond help. an emotional write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for spending your precious time in reading my poem....
Hello fellow 15 year old writer,

You've expressed a very strong topic in this piece, and I think it's great that you saw injustice and put fourth your best effort to speak (or write) out against it. We need more teens like you who are willing to stand up for what's right; it would sure make the world a lot better.

As for the poem itself, I must say that I'd suggest changing some things, especially the wording and punctuation in some lines. If you do that, I think this poem will achieve its full potential.

The first thing I think you need to change is the font. Georgia size 12 font would be a great one to use as opposed to the one you've selected. The Georgia font is, I think, the most appreicable font this site has to offer. I use it for all my writings.

Also, I'd suggest shortening this piece. Though this poem has a strong voice (mostly because it expresses a strong opinion), I think taking out the second, sixth, and seventh stanza could greatly improve the readability. I know you feel strongly about the issue, but you never want to sound too repetitive.

Lastly, I'd change these lines:

Can you tell me what was the mistake ?
of the people whose lives you take.

The question mark should be after the word "take"

Hope you found this helpful, Riddhi. I'm glad you shared it, and I'm honored that you asked me to review this piece. Keep expressing yourself.

- William Liston

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your review William and yes i will surely improve what you have told me about....I am hap.. read more

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