Haunted

When events from a year ago,

that you believed untrue,

come back to haunt you in more ways 

than you like.

You didn't believe,

that you would ever regret it,

but life is no longer worth living,

because no matter what you're fucked,

live,

let the past haunt you for years more,

Let what happened take my life,

and have others hurt around me

but yet I wouldn't have to live with my regret.

My one mistake,

I never hoped that would come back 

haunt me.

People say it wasn't my fault,

but what if it actually was my fault in every possible way.

I don't want to live in fear,

fear that it is just going to cause hurt and pain.

That it can ruin me for life,

makes the thoughts stronger,

the thoughts of wanting to die,

of my error,

more severe.

Reviews

[Relic]

The punctuation errors, sentence structure and the me/you confusion make this a bit hard to read. I think with a little tightening of sentences and revision this could be a bit better.

[Krista]

It may confuse some but I did it that way for a reason but explain exactly what you mean

[Relic]

You can leave it if you like it. My review is not really important.I'll show you a bit of what I mean.

When events from a year ago,
that you believed untrue,
come back to haunt you in more ways
than you like.
(Being there's a period, this is an incomplete sentence)

You didn't believe, (unnecessary comma)
that you would ever regret it,
but life is no longer worth living,
because no matter what you're fucked,
(the curse here seems unnecessary; not poetic).
live,
let the past haunt you for years more,
Let what happened take my life,
and have others hurt around me
but yet I wouldn't have to live with my regret.
My one mistake,
I never hoped that would come back
haunt me. (odd sentence)
People say it wasn't my fault,
(this transition from him as the focus to you is rough)

but what if it actually was my fault in every possible way.
(missing a question mark)

I don't want to live in fear,
fear that it is just going to cause hurt and pain.
That it can ruin me for life,
makes the thoughts stronger,
(It sounds like there should be a period here)

the thoughts of wanting to die,
of my error,
more severe. (odd sentence structure)

Being whatever it is that happened is not mentioned or described, this is all vague and does not leave the reader with any kind of resolution or reward for reading it.
If it's a personal poem that's fine. It's just my opinion, and as I said, it is not important. As my featured story says....write the way you want to write. :)