Harmony

                        H                                                 ear the rthym of the wind blowing,

the birds chirping

frogs croaking.

All in synch with the inner beat,

nothing out of place.

Wait somethings out of place,

an animal in pain,

waiting for its time.

Hoping it will be ending soon,

just end the cry for help someone.

Go to it,

end its misery.

Put the sounds back in place,

back in rthym again.

We are in harmony.

Reviews

[Fanciful Goddess]

cute

[Sabrina]

i really like this! one suggestion: try to use a unique way of phrasing things. you did a good job at the beginning but towards the latter it faded a little.
example: instead of saying
'Hoping it will be ending soon,'
you could say,
'Desperately wishing for an absolution"
you know?

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