PANGAEA

PANGAEA : the hypothetical landmass that existed when all continents were joined, from about 300 to 200 million years ago. -Dictionary.com 08 24 11

Through many dreary hours
I have slumbered ever so slightly
to your level right
shushing my imagination with diplomacy
in netted palms of perspiration

Brittle is the grapple on my party
to govern from the middle
in spite of swelling blood rebellions
springing from the hammock of my stomach
when the opportunity for soft and shapely
summits arises

Inspiration is born to immerse
its hard agenda through the satin gap
between us and negotiate a love Pangaea
through a man and woman's perfect fit

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I'm not sure if this is politically correct, so I can't comment on it.

Kidding, ;-P Took me from freedom, gov't, orgasms, to war and equality, not in that particular order, batshit crazy interesting....

'hard agenda through the satin gap' seriously? You've always got one doozie, I love it!!

[kublakhan27]

LOL I love the space between your first comment and the "kidding" part...it actually made me wonder for a moment ;P Yeah that's usually what happened when I first started trying to write this kind of stuff...I think I've become a little more direct in the last year or so ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[ms. barrie]

Earthy, subtle erotica, weaved through out this incredible poem. My you have a gift for words, amazing imagery, both unique, yet with the ability wonderful fluidity, K.! -- brilliant write! Thanks for sharing! :))

[kublakhan27]

Thank you Barrie...as usual you flatter me overwhelmingly with your kind words haha I'm glad you like it :) xoxo

[ms. barrie]

That i do, and Thank YOU for all your kind reviews upon "passionate obsession" -- sorry i have this thing against capital letters, lol - xoxo :))

[ms. barrie]

...P.s. you're verily welcome, K.!

[kublakhan27]

Haha that's quite okay, you'll rarely see me use caps except in the titles of my writing...I've capitalized those for as long as I've been writing ;P

[ms. barrie]

:)) xox

[kublakhan27]

;)

[ms. barrie]

;-))

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Very cool plea for peace in an observational way. It The last two lines are my fav because it ends on two images of wholeness, though we may never as a species return to the Oness of our ancient ancestors we can visit in a love tangle.

[kublakhan27]

Thanks very much, I'm glad you found that element of depth in the imagery^^

[B-poet]

Love the imagery of this poem. Very emphatic as well. Great Work

[kublakhan27]

Many thanks^^

[The Random Writings Of ..]

Wow, I am not sure if this is erotic, or geographical :) But the two can be combined into a beautiful fit of Pangaea as you say? Yes I did also look up the term, but I suspect you are not using it in the sense of true dictionary term? I could be of course here... But I get the feeling of a more sensual piece especially with the lines -
"springing from the hammock of my stomach
when the opportunity for soft and shapely
summits arises"
and
"Inspiration is born to immerse"
And you bring us home with a man and women's perfect fit :) Awe yes I feel sensual and beauty coming off this piece - again I could be off base here, but I love it! It is articulate, radiant and beautiful! Once again my friend you have created a profound piece that knocks you off your feet! Thank you as always for sharing :)

[kublakhan27]

Haha yes I think I was leaning towards the erotic theme, though I wanted to see how "sensual" I could keep it without going all-out erotic :) I'm glad you saw the beauty and sensuality in it, and I thank you as always for the support :)

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

:) Your welcome! this was sensual indeed! You did a VERY good job of keeping the the balance between sensual and erotic :)

[kublakhan27]

That's cool...I'm happy to know I pulled it off convincingly enough :D

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

You did indeed!

[kublakhan27]

:)

[BIIKAY]

hmm. I def had to think about this one! I like it though. :))

[kublakhan27]

Haha yeah so did I :P Glad you like it :)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Strange and intriguing. It seems like there is a reverse time flow and transition from the human metaphor to an overlay of geological allusion. I like it! :)

[kublakhan27]

There are a few layers in there but your interpretation slides in between them quite comfortably lol Glad you like it :)