SOMEBODY'S WIT'S END

03 12 11

Take up your solace
and puncture the water balloon
petticoat of pride
skirting my unsightly sense of loss

Tap to attention
the chemicals swishing to the good
maybe jolt a lazy tide
with a moon's tug of realism

Dispatch a fur of flies
to usurp my sugar coat

Anything to make it clear to me
that I can be the undergarments
of a power ballad and remain credible
beneath the latex applique of rock and roll

Reviews

[Priscilla Moore]

Nicely done!

[kublakhan27]

Thank you :D

[MOON]

Very good write love the lines .that I can be the undergarments of a power ballad and remain credible. Like your turn of phrase

[kublakhan27]

Many thanks^^

[Melobldnfr]

My favorite of yours I've read so far. Written in the writer's own voice regarding self...particularly poignant, in my opinion.

[kublakhan27]

Thanks so much :) I am really glad that you like this one cuz I do have a soft spot for it but it's never gotten many looks anywhere I've posted it...