ART IN PROGRESS

ART IN PROGRESS

A Poem by kublakhan27
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From the distance of a dreamer
I must be to lay awake
and see the harness of a muse
in the slender fingertips you unfurl
to detain thoroughbreds of ambition
in your wooden case
Horse hairs entangle and embrace
against the wall of flesh-shaded
canvas under lush sheets
sweating drops of oily rainbows

Why the distance of a dreamer?
Even though I lay
not far away and fully conscious
of the five fingers and a hand
that nervously explore your dimensions
only under shut eyelids
am I to grace your canvas
with the permanence of art
our signatures a dialect for two
amid the universal alphabet

© 2012 kublakhan27



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kublakhan27
The only way I ever post old stuff here is on a whim.

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Oh now you're dancing on the table with this one...

'canvas under lush sheets
sweating drops of oily rainbows'

I would faint but I have to finish this review....seriously, love this one, it has a certain
je ne sais quoi, that is sensually enticing, your muse oozes quiet abandonment...just love it!
Nervously explore my dimensions anytime, just saying ;-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

LOL Yes, I must be more respectful of that alphabet ;P
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Maybe you need to slow down exploring new dimensions for a while hun...just saying ;-P
kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

Haha in my current state of mind, you're probably right ;P



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They say a horse represents many things, and those things change according to who is stating them. I think your horse represents beauty on here. A beauty that was there yet out of reach:) A beauty who inspired you to create this marvelous piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

As always, you know just where I'm coming from :) It's always out of reach...but I'm glad this piece.. read more
I love the theme of art, painting and horses all in one elegant sweep of a quill, it's hard to tell who is painting whom, you the artist, paint the painter in this unique write, at least that is how it come across to me :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

All very good points, I tried to leave the roles open-ended...thank you Corset :)
This is great stuff, it seems to be our special tradition to write about poetry these days. My eyes would have preferred more stanzas, but that's quite superficial I guess.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

That's true, though this one is four years old so I guess I was inspired by this particular phenomen.. read more
You mix the world of a painter..a lover...a dreamer. Fascinating!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much Muse :)
I found every line to be enthralling...each one has it's own unique dimension...
This piece captivated me from the first stroke of your pen...

"From the distance of a dreamer
I must be to lay awake
and see the harness of a muse
in the slender fingertips you unfurl
to detain thoroughbreds of ambition
in your wooden case"~ This is art my friend!~xo~Love it K! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

Thank you Robbie, I always look forward to hearing your insights on my work, especially ones like th.. read more
Oh now you're dancing on the table with this one...

'canvas under lush sheets
sweating drops of oily rainbows'

I would faint but I have to finish this review....seriously, love this one, it has a certain
je ne sais quoi, that is sensually enticing, your muse oozes quiet abandonment...just love it!
Nervously explore my dimensions anytime, just saying ;-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

LOL Yes, I must be more respectful of that alphabet ;P
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Maybe you need to slow down exploring new dimensions for a while hun...just saying ;-P
kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

Haha in my current state of mind, you're probably right ;P
You breathe out a hauntingly beautiful expression of life... your muse so near in the distance... the passions that strike the chords that bring your poetry to life. Profoundly voiced.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

This one certainly came from deep within...thank you Eros :)
this sounds like the body braille....interesting and copious with determined yet reluctant fervor. it feels like one of those awkward sexual liaisons somehow. very gingerly written and yet quite good. stellar!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

Thank you Quin :) It's funny how I've gone from the gingerly themes of a couple of years ago, to wri.. read more
quinfinn

4 Years Ago

i love it
kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

:)
cool poem it's almost romantic, dug it AND love it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

Thanks very much, I think there's certainly a bit of romanticism in it...
Favorited, this was pretty inspiring, the ability to create art and send out a more personal message :P aye aye I loved it :P

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

Thank you Keegan as always :)

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Nova Scotia, Canada



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