SIMPLE AS THAT

SIMPLE AS THAT

A Poem by kublakhan27
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Reached for the sun
you got burned

Left you behind
you returned

Longing for luck
you got hurt

Happiness lost
in a spurt

Hoped for a break
you got bent

Nobody knew
what you meant

Looking for joy
in a hole

Pushed from behind
by your soul

© 2013 kublakhan27



Author's Note

kublakhan27
I keep saying how much I hate my early stuff, yet I keep going back to it...there is no "little place in my heart that has a soft spot for it," I really do loathe this stuff, and here I am posting it, and others will follow...In keeping with personal tradition, there will be no RRs sent for pre-millenium me...if it gets seen, it gets seen...

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There is a feeling of deep rejection and pain in this one...even though the lines are short and rhyming. There is so much left between the lines...a person who tries his or her best and still gets stung by circumstance and Madame Fate.....a person who feels he is out of control. A simple write...and yet a powerful one, Steve. Good work. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


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kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend...it's hard to believe that I wrote this so long ago, almost sixteen years... read more



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There is a feeling of deep rejection and pain in this one...even though the lines are short and rhyming. There is so much left between the lines...a person who tries his or her best and still gets stung by circumstance and Madame Fate.....a person who feels he is out of control. A simple write...and yet a powerful one, Steve. Good work. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend...it's hard to believe that I wrote this so long ago, almost sixteen years... read more
Ahh Dali in infancy ;) More direct than usual, but you always hit the mark Benji! Pushed from behind by your soul...ouchie! :) xo

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Lol you're not as hungover as I thought!! ;)
kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Hahaha Even a hangover can't overpower those thoughts love...should I even be saying that stuff here.. read more
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

No one is listening haha...carry on
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i felt the sadness of this piece ~ full of hurt and lost ~ loneliness.... and hey i don't accept rr but i do read your work my friend... your one of my friends to roam around to check and read their works...

Every piece of work piece we write always, always have room in our heart no matter how ancient(lol) the write is.... because our writes is our children, a piece of our selves put into words...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

Thank you my friend, you know how grateful I am for your unwavering support, and the understanding y.. read more
This is a couple of wistful lines and well penned (: It was something that really speaks to the reader making as relate to the piece. Don't worry about it, this is still one of your beautiful poems ;D

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

Thank you Rhianne, that means a lot :D
Rhianne Ney

4 Years Ago

It's my pleasure to read it (: and of course, review it also
well, i have to tell you that this piece literally resonates with personality and meaning. i loved it and i would like very much to see more of your earlier writes, and, it's as simple as that!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

I have grown rather disenchanted with the RRs among other things...I send out a bunch only to be tol.. read more
quinfinn

4 Years Ago

it is reviews which generate interest, and comments on those reviews which perpetuate the whole proc.. read more
kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

That's what gets me though...people see when something gets a review but I don't seem to get that ou.. read more

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kublakhan27
kublakhan27

Nova Scotia, Canada



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My first book is out! Any comments that anyone may have to offer regarding my work would be deeply appreciated, as I'm yet to get a review. www.amazon.com/Waltz-Around-Swirls-Steven-Fortune/dp.. more..

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