MY SHORTEST POEM...FOR YOU

MY SHORTEST POEM...FOR YOU

A Poem by kublakhan27
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07 08 14

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If you only knew
what's already been written

© 2014 kublakhan27



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Short and sweet. I like the poem.

Kaze~

Posted 3 Years Ago


See this can be taken in many ways... I think I'd have a better idea if I read more of you but for now I will leave it open to ideas and all... Nice poem, less is more in this case.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

I had been holding on to these lines for the longest time...I thought for sure the would wind up as .. read more
Kayleigh

3 Years Ago

I think these two lines make a perfect, "short" poem and yes, sometimes less is definitely more.
My goodness, that was short! Haha. Full of mystery though. Sometimes saying less is enticing. It sparks curiosity.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Haha I never imagined writing a two-line poem...I had it pegged as the ending for a poem but the mor.. read more
Do tell....

Please?

:) (:

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Haha Hey, I can't be in-your-face blunt all the time, I have to be mysterious once in a while...okay.. read more
Matching Socks

3 Years Ago

Ahhhhh. Gotcha
kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

I've been doing lots of 'commentating' lately haha
We would all worry a lot less, that is for sure. Great write, Steve.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thank you Pryde.
Just what is behind the curtain? What a tease of a poem, creating thousands of possibilities in the mind of the reader. This is genius, Steve.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Rita, you humble me with your kind words :) For a while, I had these lines pegged for.. read more
This poem says so much.
Very clever, but gets the mind working.
Imagining all of those things unsaid here is half the fun.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thank you Zeitgeist, glad it made you think :)
I think I know... for I read all of you...
But often I am too speachless.

I think this is my shortest review ever to you lol

- Elisa

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Haha, but even this piece of you speaks volume, that's why I found it so good and greatly fun, you j.. read more
kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Haha Truth be told, I had these lines pegged for the end of a poem but the more I thought about it, .. read more

3 Years Ago

See? that's how poetry has to be shaped like a diamond, and it always must be~ changeble, until it's.. read more
So few words but ones that could be a peek into a million more where others have not ventured.........to the point but oh, what a point you make!! This certainly does leave a lot to the imagination!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Sheila, glad it made you ponder a bit ;)

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Nova Scotia, Canada



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My first book is out! Any comments that anyone may have to offer regarding my work would be deeply appreciated, as I'm yet to get a review. www.amazon.com/Waltz-Around-Swirls-Steven-Fortune/dp.. more..

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