REVOLUTIONS PER MINUTE

REVOLUTIONS PER MINUTE

A Poem by kublakhan27
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Periphery obliterated
by the symmetric crags
of a lightning bolt gleam
illuminating my incrimination
of warped memories
in the unequivocal conviction
of unceasingly succinct revolutions
Entertainment contests art's
academic inclinations
Academics have no place
in  a sex drive or an inclination
to rock out in solitary sways
of an analog indulgence
Shrunken visuals are compelled
to adapt to environmental whims
It's irrelevant against the auditory
evanescence of your output
True I have to interrupt
the candlelit litanies
of heard indulgences
on a more frequent basis
but the senses happily adapt
to the more defined intervals
in a sensual tenacity
of musical immersion
nefariously frowning on skipped songs
Save the automatic modernity
of convenience for appliances
This is not microwave cooking
or reality-impulsive channels
This is entertainment
Art is the framework
of a jiving audiophile's sense
of what a prude is deficient in
like a vitamin
or a comprehension
of enabled chemistry
in tracked instances
of organic understanding

© 2014 kublakhan27


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well well, I would love to hear what inspired this piece Steve.... there are a few parts in here that have me scratching my head... lol
love pearl jam....... I also love a lot of the phrasing in this one... takes my mind and my emotions in so many directions...

you are right, this is entertainment... sometimes academics aren't needed, especially with the sensual inclinations... mmmm yes... who needs a microwave when you have heated chemistry?... well done sir... I enjoyed this one...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

This all started with the fact that I sometimes get mesmerized by a spinning record ;) I was trying .. read more



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While we spin and move to the beat of it all we can get lost in our own dizzy perceptions. Sometimes it is a matter of taste, but then again, some taste buds have been worn away by the entertainment rather that the ability to savor something special.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Incredible, is all I can say, well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"Art is the framework
of a jiving audiophile's sense". I feel as if this relates to music.

There is a revolution going on and no one can see it but the art around us and the artists.
Without art, we are deficient and being prude is sometimes not the best policy do to "Shrunken visuals are compelled
to adapt to environmental whims". At least this is how I take it.

"This is not microwave cooking
or reality-impulsive channels
This is entertainment".

It definitely is. Art isn`t even art now, the computers does it for us and without the old fashioned way , one could never truly understand the conventionalism of suffering.

Excellent. Excellent. Excellent.

K.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Music… the universal language. Whatever would life be without music? And songs are poetry set to music. I enjoyed your poem.

I do wonder is some of the terms might cause non-poet readers to struggle with it and abandon the read. Did you know you only have the first line or sentence to catch your reader's attention? Personally, I love to see writers use the full depth and reach of the language. But, even educated readers are too lazy to focus above an eighth grade reading level. Did you know that newspaper standard is a fifth grade reading level; magazine standard is eighth grade level.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

It would probably be pretty bleak, and I say that with the highest degree of understatement haha...s.. read more
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

I too, try to include a few unique words in my writing. I've always kept to hand a thesaurus, a dict.. read more
Incredible! I'm always in awe of your vocabulary and the way you use it. Your mind makes associations mine doesn't, but somehow they always fit together in the end. Not only entertaining but food for thought.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Jennie...I'm happy to know that I can entertain people sometimes cuz I think I just d.. read more
the thing about this that stands out first is your uncanny ability to maintain a focus while applying all of that fuzzy ;)
even Beethoven practiced sterile sex now and then:
http://youtu.be/2lqqimx_83M

i read your poem .. then some other comments .. i agree with KL .. and after reading Frieda's i read it again with better understanding and more enjoyment ..
i had a friend in high school his nick name is Cloud .. yes true story .. he was a loner and a little goofy (drank robotussin to get his high) he had the greatest private collection of 45's the world has ever known .. piled in 4 ft. stacks in his room and if you asked to play a named tune he picked from the stack in 2-3 tries .. knew exactly where everything was ... i often wonder whatever happened to him
love your poem! thanks for letting us glimpse a healthy obsession of yours
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

LOL For such an astounding poet, you are hilariously direct sometimes Mrs.R ;)
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ha you have no clue, Mrs R's real life and Frieda's poetic life are universes apart. haha
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Haha Welcome to the club love :)
Hang on, I need to grab my flash light...
Ok, got it!
Let's shine this thing on your brain shall we?
Yup, just as I suspected... You have a disco ball for a brain.
Dazzling.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Haha I love this review...that image may even wind up in a poem some time...thanks bud :)
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

Haha!! My pleasure. :)
Spin the black circle, how apropos, was wondering when you were going to get around to writing this tribute to your vinyl obsession with your massive collection of an extensive record collection, this is a love poem in the truest sense, anyone who lives for music will adore these words...keep whirling those black discs, they make for grand inspirational poetry. 'Organic understanding', and they don't talk back ha ha I love the musical immersion and I can dance to it too. ;) xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Haha Don't worry, I'm making myself dizzy just thinking of those words ;) xo
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Feel like I'm sitting upon that black vinyl some days, just twirling twirling whirling haha ;)
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Haha Are you trying to make me faint Mrs.R? ;)
For me, this is about doubting the veracity of one's own perceptions and memories, and acknowledging that expressing said perceptions in art is an outlet, but not necessarily, reality. Or, it could be about the weather :) Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it...haha Yes, leave it to me to make a declaration of entertainment, then go off o.. read more
Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Yes, because you do it best.:)
kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

:) Thank you my friend.
bit of a whirlwind just blew through my head here mate, i'm still reeling but overall I say "yes, this is entertainment of the highest order" well done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

9 Years Ago

Haha Don't worry, my own head is still spinning in the wake of this one, with no pun intended :P Tha.. read more

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