The peace

 

Alone Sometimes We Want To Be

No one sometimes we have to Be

 No hand should hold You

No bond should bind You

Just go away, far away, stay away

 Just you,your breath,your heart beat

 The wind that blows your hair says to your life cheer

 The sun that sweats your skin makes your mind clear

 The flying birds, the charming river, the growing trees will whispers in your ear,,,,,,,, 

"Hey Human,this is heaven and you are here!!!"...........

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Kuldeep desai,
"The Peace", speaks as a title and as a message of how solitude is a medicine to human spiritual health. "Alone" gives much meaning to this poem and leads nicely into the healing that is available in said state of alone-ness. Line 3 and 4, "No hand, no bond" and "go away, stay away" with flying birds, charming river, growing trees whisper in your ear"....... We people are fit somehow to the earth and need its healing balm............This was a nice poem to read..........Kathy

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you for stopping by i am glad that you have liked it.........

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Solitude is necessary during life's many seasons. It can be freeing, healing and recharges our soul. Very nice piece. Starz x

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you and i am glad that you have liked it.........

[Anindita Janhabee]

One has come into this world alone... and will go away alone...
that's the fact.......
the reality...
but real peace you find when you dedicate yourself to nature........
i m a lover of nature and I believe that you find peace in the arms of nature......
very nice piece!!!

[Kuldeep desai]

thank you for reading it.........

[Anindita Janhabee]

my pleasure!!!

[aLittlePain]

Beautifully written!

I love your voice in this.

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you.........

[Shannon]

This one really resonates. It is a stand out. I especially love the internal repetition.

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for the review i am glad that you have liked it.............

[Ruth]

Solitary time is paramount to nurture the soul and be attentive...beautiful...

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you for those kind words.........

[andrew mitchell]

Sometimes one has to be alone to be free. A good write!

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you..........I am glad that you have liked it.........

[wordman]

sometimes,we just got to be free !

[Kuldeep desai]

Yeah that can be the only medicine were will get internal strength.........

[Riti Rajput]

The moment you have described is perhaps the best moment sometimes... away from the noise of life, sometimes we want to stay at a peaceful place, where no bonds are there....
just me and a deep breathe...
Thanks for sharing :)

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you..........Always its my pleasure to see your reviews here..........

[Prabha Salimath]

Beautiful and I agree, peace is something which can't be provide which is to be make ourself...

[Kuldeep desai]

Thank you.........i am glad you have liked it....