Married Man

A Poem by Kuldeep desai

'Dedicated to all married ones'

We were the king,We were the rulers,We were everything

Even we are the god's first creation

But he created Women with all planning

don't know what was his intention

March 8 Women's day,November 14 Children's day

remaining 363 days men's day

From Cradle to grave seeing all kinds of Women

but still can't understand what are they

My Wife get's ready for shopping with all her fashion

i get ready to go with her with all patience

It's better to watch an boring serials instead of going with her

She comes out with her tiny bag,me holding all the bags of her

Women give birth to a child bearing all the pain

really she is great and that is right

But we take care of the child throughout our life

even changing diaper middle at the night

Sometime i feel like i should have all the super powers

so that i can fly,go any where i want with full freedom like

A Superman

But when my child holds my hand and say 'love you dad'

My better half hugs me tight and whispers 'You are so mean and bad'

I don't know from where i get all the powers,i feel proud of being

A MARRIED MAN

© 2014 Kuldeep desai

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barleygirl

I enjoyed your poem, as well as all the different responses. You've written this on the edge of controversy . . . I believe what you say is true for many men, but there are also a few strokes of unreality in this poem, so that women might not like the way they're depicted, but men probably don't like the way I depict them, either. In short, it's best not to generalize about huge categories of people like men & women or Christians & Hindis or poor & rich. You will always offend someone if you do this. As you explained to one reviewer, this is YOUR perspective & that's fine. But you could still express your perspectives on men & women without seeming to BASE your message on the idea that this defines men & women. The best part is that you show positive & negative for both groups, so this is a balanced message! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago

Kathy Van Kurin

Kuldeep desai,
"married Man" is a lovely nod to the position within the family from a guys viewpoint (yours.) I think that you have portrayed your position in a way many people can empathize with well. Second paragraph-women's day and childrens day then "All kinds of women...but still can't understand what they are.." That's ok Humanity will always be a mystery but we are always learning! Just a delightful poem. Thank you for your fun within! Blessings Kathy

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

thank you for the review.......i am glad you have liked it.........

armin

Kuldeep what a great dedication, you know I loved the thought process of it. Your start was amazing, creative.
We were the king,We were the rulers,We
were everything
Even we are the god's first creation
But he created Women with all planning
don't know what was his intention
You crafted the poem very well, I have recently passed my teenage so surely the write doesn't belong to me, but I appreciate the message given. I had a splendid read.
Great job. Bengaluru, nice place, have been there plenty of times
armin. ..

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

thank you for the review.........I am glad that you have liked my place and also my poem....

Confuser

What a great poem! Yes, you are married, and what a wonderful message and theme, I loved it. What a wonderful job you have done; it pours honesty like water from a spigot and the visual of you doing all those things - the humour in it was also delightful to hear. Thank you for this perspective of a man's world as we woman rule the home, I suppose. My husband a dear man to put up with me, however, he's no piece of cake at time. Thank you. Leaving with a big smile.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Wow, how well said, haven' changed the pen name confuser, but it just popped in my head when I signe.. read more

9 Years Ago

Your welcome.....

9 Years Ago

......................................................Enough, this merry go round. Thank you.

♔ CrownedDevil &#..

Great poem, nicely penned. :-)

Kaze~

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank u for your review......I am glad you have liked it....

9 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-)

SonOfaSailor

I kind of wish that you wouldn't speak for all men when you said "Women give birth to a child bearing all the pain/ really she is great and that is right/ But we take care of the child throughout our life"

I interpreted this as the man taking care of the child more than the woman does, almost bearing most of the responsibility. If this is correct than I would have to disagree for most of the cases that I've experienced. If you meant something else than correct me if I'm wrong.

There's a lot of grammar errors, i.e: get's instead of gets, but besides that it gets the point across pretty well.

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9 Years Ago

In some case I may be right..... But in some case I may be wrong.....So only I have narrated it cons.. read more

9 Years Ago

No problem and thank you for respecting my view although I should probably keep opinions out of revi.. read more

9 Years Ago

No..... Its k........

Prabha Salimath

If such man is available anywhere on this earth Im glad to meet once and thank him. This piece is super cool to read but I don't think so many girls have man like you said, here I see working woman have to put up with her husband and children without a helping hand.

" She comes out with her tiny
bag,me holding all the bags of her " it would looks good if I is used instead of me and her bags instead of bags of her.

" Women give birth to a child
bearing all the pain
really she is great and that is right
But we take care of the child
throughout our life
even changing diaper middle at the
night"

better guys you exchange the offer for nine months burden for yourself and rest is for wife, may be she gets ready.