Think of Me

Think of me.
Think of me when you're in HER arms.
Think of me when you're laying in her bed and
Realizing how unhappy you are.


Think of me when she demands
so much more than what you can give her.
Remember me when she tugs and tears at your heart
And bleeds you until you're left in a puddle
Of your own blood.


Think of me when you find out
She's cheating on you behind your back.
Think of me when you beat up the man
That took your place in her heart.


Think of me when she leaves.
Think of me when you realize she's actually betrayed you...
Like I would have never done.


Remember me when you realize that you could've
Done so much better.
And that you HAVE done better
Think of me when you realize
That that "better" was me.


Think of me when you see me in the cafe
Sitting with my man
Kissing him
Holding him
Loving him
Like I used to love you.


Think of me as that tear slips down your cheek
And the cold freezes it half way down its journey.
Think of me as you realize you no longer have me.
Think of me when you walk into that weapon-shop.
When you pay for that gun...


When you buy the bullets...

 

 

Think of me when you load that gun...

 

Think of me when you pull the trigger.

Author's Note

-__- Yes the placement of the lines is horrible. IGNORE THAT AND LOOK AT THE WORDS. AT THE MEANING. PEOPLE GET IT????

Reviews

[The DuchessPoet]

All I can say is EXCELLENT!
"Think of me when you deal with you"...

I love it!!!!

Very well done my friend! Very well done!!!


Admirably,
Your fan
The Duchess...

[Wicahpi]

I wonder, when my boyfriend of four years,pulled the trigger;
did he think of me as the lights went out. distressing.
Such a waste of life.

[Nautili]

Chilling poem. wow......it is so sad , but I like that you do not say who the person has shot- himself, the other man or "you". It leads it open to the imagination...and therefore makes it somewhat easier to read!

[Wildecat]

This is an exceptional write for a young lady soon to be 14. Well done.

[lots fo love ♥]

i loved it so much and i also know that i am repeting myself it was my favorite so far.