TRY TO TAKE MINE?

VERSE ONE-

I sit here with my thoughts cloudy,

getting rowdy,

like a no limit soldire 'bout to get bady 'bout it,

the game,

i try to keep it simple and plain,

maintain the name,

retain the money and the fame,

keep it locked and incessantly make it burn, the flame,

but still,

player haters wanna kill,

my will,

the zeal,

to seal the deal,

so i can make ends meet on the table put some meal,

they wanna see this n***a in jail,

so worse that i cant jump bail,

well,

it aint hard to tell,

why am comin strapped with a 9,

clipped to my hip,

try to take mine?

then you in for a bad time,

so worse,

i dont curse when i burst,

but i sure bet,

there's gonna be slow music singing,

flowers throwing,

relatives mourning,

widows crying each morning,

try to take mine?

fool if you dont know ,

now you know.

Author's Note

just some rap lyrics i tried to compose, excuse the connectivity because i just typed it directly onto the page as it flowed from my head.

Reviews

[Emily B]

I felt the beat of it. The heat of it. It swaggers a little.

[Barbara Walker]

This is great for free flowing thought! It's raw, to the point, don't mess with me! I do feel it would be just as strong or stronger, if you left off the last line. This is very good! Barbara

[forfila]

I understand the place this comes from in you,,,,and I have a lot of time and respect for true hip hop culture. Some nice rhyming here too. Nice one man.