Sunrise

       p n o t i z                                 
    y                e                              
  h                    d                            
 by your slow dance
I await your glowing                     
  b                  m                            
     o            o                            
            s

Reviews

[Abhijit aka The Lucky U..]

A standing ovation ,
for the poem ,
and the presentation ,
which is a gem .

[Poetry Girl]

this poem definitely caught my eye! very creative and i like it

[Sara Mercury]

F*** that, the f****ing sunrise! (lol - a personal joke - originated from a time in my life when I was going a bit round the bend)

I'm with the other reviewer - what would they call this style? Pictoetry? lol

Very unique and eye-catching!

[Loving Angel]

I like the skill a lot it was cool. Good job on the poem

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

exotic sphere~ silk unwinding in perfectly metered breaths~ exquisite~

[Daniel Gardner]

Very unique. What made you want to do a poem this way?

[Robin]

what will you call this form ? very unique