Yin Yang

"you tell me"

Yin Yang
the world in a bang
slipping through the
      cracks ---a solo
      dance---an eternal
      clock---swirling trance
      tick tock---death knocks
Yin Yang
the world in a bang

Reviews

[Perception Shapes Poetr..]

creative and chaotic yet orderly
perfect blend of the yin *& yang!

[☾Devils⌛Dau..]

I wrote a poem with the same name and I like how you did this it's just written with a sense that just makes me want to read it over and over again! Nice job! This is awesome

[Tina Kline]

Sounds like the dance of life to me, the good and the bad side of it. Nicely written, like your word choices and how you laid this out on the page/screen.

[Goodbye]

Good, tight writing that says so much - excellent little piece!

[Jeff]

Very creative. The world is a swirling dance of conflict and harmony.

[David W Moore III]

a solo dance of opposite sides, clash or harmony, the world in a bang... I guess that says it.

[Sara Mercury]

It's 'Yin Yang' (Yin = female energy; Yang = male energy) or Yin = negative and Yang = positive, or Yin = black, and Yang = white. I suppose, even, we could go on to say that Yin= evil and Yang = good. lol

Nice poem, though - very unique. One might think of the 'world on fire' kind of thing here. Nothing definite, and very abstract. Cool ...

[Poetry Girl]

this is creative and i like the way you wrote it. nice

[Amber Betty-Marie Child..]

this world is horribly crazy. theres only wanting peace cant even bring it up to wish anymore

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

universal dualities tick tocking on in captive cycles~