Existence
A Poem by
kuru
I think therefore, I am
My thoughts takes a different turn when the "Id" of my "ego" takes over --- spellbinding fire --- summoning my desire. I see you in the distance my hands reach out trying to eliminate the depth of field--- between us--- this stereoscopic vision fuels my lonely existence. living off the pieces of predictable conversations---the sleepy days and the ----deja-vu nights...
© 2010 kuru
Reviews
So beautifully you craft your poems, and so easy it is for your reader to feel them.
This is so romantic, meditative, reflective, and heading for my favorites.
Thank You.
Posted 2 Years Ago
Keep writing like this, you'll make my heart burst.
Posted 2 Years Ago
Keep writing like this, you'll make my heart burst.
Great imagery, awesome write
Posted 2 Years Ago
Great imagery, awesome write
I love the imagery and use of language here. Beautiful.
Posted 2 Years Ago
I love the imagery and use of language here. Beautiful.
a perspective taken on from depth. great insight! This is very excellent!
Posted 2 Years Ago
a perspective taken on from depth. great insight! This is very excellent!
inner love displayed in the deepest.. written down excellently
Posted 2 Years Ago
inner love displayed in the deepest.. written down excellently
A daring look into ones consciousness.
Void of protection stripped and
displayed openly visible. . Humanly
written..well done.
Posted 2 Years Ago
A daring look into ones consciousness.
Void of protection stripped and
displayed openly visible. . Humanly
written..well done.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
how gorgeously refracted~ striations on the canyon walls of the ego~ endless explorative possibilities~
Posted 2 Years Ago
how gorgeously refracted~ striations on the canyon walls of the ego~ endless explorative possibilities~
inner conversations displayed in an artistic manner ~
Posted 2 Years Ago
inner conversations displayed in an artistic manner ~