Existence

Existence

A Poem by kuru
"

I think therefore, I am

"
My thoughts takes a different
turn when the "Id" of my "ego"
takes over --- spellbinding
fire --- summoning my desire.

I see you in the distance
my hands reach out trying
to eliminate the depth
of field--- between us---

this stereoscopic vision
fuels my lonely existence.

living off the pieces
of predictable
conversations---the
sleepy days and the
----deja-vu nights...


© 2010 kuru



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So beautifully you craft your poems, and so easy it is for your reader to feel them.

This is so romantic, meditative, reflective, and heading for my favorites.

Thank You.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Keep writing like this, you'll make my heart burst.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Great imagery, awesome write

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love the imagery and use of language here. Beautiful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


a perspective taken on from depth. great insight! This is very excellent!

Posted 2 Years Ago


inner love displayed in the deepest.. written down excellently

Posted 2 Years Ago


A daring look into ones consciousness.
Void of protection stripped and
displayed openly visible. . Humanly
written..well done.


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how gorgeously refracted~ striations on the canyon walls of the ego~ endless explorative possibilities~

Posted 2 Years Ago


inner conversations displayed in an artistic manner ~

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on October 2, 2010
Last Updated on October 2, 2010
Tags: existence, love, lonely, philosophy, life, poetry, desire

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kuru
kuru

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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