A New Year

firewords

and I saw time crumble--crumble---crumble under the fireworks
for the light was too fast--- faster--faster than time
i hopped on-- riding--riding--riding its wavelength
it took me a year, a year--a year ahead---splitting this second

if I could take back the night
it would take me a year back

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[Goodbye]

I DO like this - the image of time crumbling behind the fireworks, underscoring all we have is this moment...

Excellent write, Kuru!

[Robin]

I always imagine time as a path that crumbles behind me , words to wonder of

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LOL...yeah clever..love the ending..