Another Letter to Heaven

My daughter whom is deceased....

     Kymber I hope and pray that you are at peace...I actually know you are, I can feel the peace.  I'm so thankful that I had you for the 28 years that I did.  You were an absolute blessing from God, a gift from the Heavens.  I know God had to call you home because they needed you in Heaven.  I've had to learn to get over myself and make it easier for the both of us.  My grieving is missing you and I'm really supposed to be happy that you're with the Almighty.  

     It's December the 20th and Christmas is almost here....You were my Christmas every year!  I loved making your Christmas for you even is your Dad yelled at me about spending too much money.  I had to do it no matter what...my heart was so happy to be in your life.  Best thing that could have ever happened to me.  I want to say, "Merry Christmas Kymber".  I still miss you  and love you and ALWAYS WILL!!!  I miss you baby girl, you know you were my world..

     Honey if you don't mind, please give me sign when you are around, lately I have had dreams about you. I loved you from the day I saw you until forever, my child....Mommy 

Reviews

[Jo Billygoat]

A symbolic star placed on top the tree.
I think of you at peace in heaven
There spreading peace and joy

A smile is crafted upon my face
Thinking of you making heaven a better place
Fore when you were here, twas a much better place

Instances of our living life to its fullest
Taking time to waste on monetary mishaps
Such poor moments spent on our brief time with each other

I look back
Always at the end of every year
Christmas for me is your memory.

[SleeplessVolcano]

This is such a heartfelt write. How about turning it into a poem, without the prose? As it is, in prose from, it is great, but poetry has a way of expressing our emotions a lot more substantially than prose can.....and this one oozes emotion, because you wrote from real-life experience.

Another thought.....seeing that you are considering writing a biography...this is just a crazy thought, use it, don't use it....but it occurred to me how powerful 50 or a 100 of such prose like "love letters" to a deceased loved one could be......somehow, combined into a tapestry of remembrance....:)

[kyam]

Thank you for your review....I really do appreciate it......Kyam

[danny]

i really can not say if this is good or bad writing cause it is not even a story but a plea from a mother i did not enjoy it

[kyam]

Thank you for your constructive criticism, I do appreciate it...Kyam

[Jo Billygoat]

This site is a place for expression. Continue to express how you want. Opinions are like a*s holes, everyone has one.