Through The Rain

Through The Rain

A Poem by laceyjane23
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A poem about dealing with life's upsets, and knowing there is light at the end of the tunnel.

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I know that you are hurting,

though I cannot feel your pain.

I know it will get better,

you just have to make it through the rain.

 

He took your love and broke your heart,

It's enough to go insane.

I know it will get better,

if you make it through the rain.

 

I have seen from your eyes the tears you shed,

like rain drops on a window pane.

I know it will get better,

you just have to make it through the rain.

 

I know you feel way off track,

like an old brokedown train.

I know it will get better,

If you make it through the rain.

 

Though I cannot tell you how to feel,

but I know this loss will become a gain.

I promise it will be better,

When you make it through the rain.

© 2008 laceyjane23


Author's Note

laceyjane23
please ignore grammar and punctuation errors the content is whats important

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This is totally inspirational and very true.
If we can make it through the rain, we'll come out as better people.

Awesome poem.
-Steph

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perhaps it is because I am more of an emotional wreck than I would like to let on, perhaps it is just a case of really trying to be honest with myself for the first time in forever, or perhaps I am just a crybaby...lol; but I felt the start of that welling in my eyes - but it was stifled by the smile that could not help but arrive at the hope in this piece. Yes, once we make it through the rain... things will be better.

Posted 15 Years Ago


i love the alternating repeating lines at the end of each verse. yes i said verse cuz i hear this as a song more than a poem :) your compassion breathes thru your words nicely :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words to me are like a dear friend bringing comfort in a most beautiful way! A lovely, caring poem about helping someone through a difficult time. I especially like your words of hope to end this. You are so talented with words. What makes your poems so special is you put yourself into those words and truly care.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you so much for sharing your work and keeping your optimistic message out there.
peace,
Danielle

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 21, 2008

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laceyjane23
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Mesa, AZ



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Well lets see, I am 28 yrs old, and i love to write. I write poetry, lyrics, stories, articles, and I am currently working on my first book, and it has been quite an experience! I love life and I beli.. more..

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