Loving You

a simple and cheesy poem I wrote about my hubby!!

I love the way you look at me.

I love the way you smile.

I love it when I hear you laugh.

I love your sense of style.

 

I love the way you hold my hand,

and the way you touch my face.

I love the way you kiss my lips,

and the feel of your embrace.

 

I love the way you care for me,

and the way you show support for me too.

I love the way you talk with me,

it shows our love is true.

 

I love the way your there for me,

when I'm feeling blue.

But the thing I love the most,

is being in love with you.

Author's Note

please ignore grammar and punctuation errors

Reviews

[Sandra K]

What a sweet poem! I can't wait to write a poem like this to my future husband.
Its great that you found love!

[The Musings of Mary H.]

Beautifully done! I can imagine this being picked to put on a lot of wedding invitations. I always love your work.

"I love the way you care for me,

and the way you show support for me too.

I love the way you talk with me,

it shows our love is true."


Mary

[Nykkiicia Cion]

i also have a poem titled loving you...come back to my page and see if its anything like urs...:-)

[None]

I think your love is lacey, laceyjane! It's pretty and fine and it's hard to put true love into mere words. You did so very tenderly. All the best to you and your husband always!

[Lena]

Spoken like a true romantic. :)

[Candle in the wind]

It was so heartwarming to read this you are blessed to have a husband like this and he is twice blessed to have a loving wife who appreciates him so much.It is so refreshing to see such untarnished happiness, such exquisite simplicity and forthrightness.God bless you both and may your love grow stronger.

[E. M. Murren]

That is a wonderful tribute to your love. It really is beautifully written. You have a lovely style. I really like it. Cheers.