How Did You Steal My Heart

How Did You Steal My Heart

A Poem by laceyjane23
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a song i wrote about finding unexpected love

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Yesterday is gone
Tomorrow is almost here
Today is on my mind
I'm just trying to see clear

(verse 2)

Everything I want
Is everything you said
With all that could be
You just keep running through my head

(chorus)

If you could only see
What you do to me
I'm tangled up inside
There's no where I can hide


You make me wanna stay
With every word you say


My love's flowing off the chart....
How did you steal my heart.

(verse 3)

Emotions rolling strong
I've set my sights on you
You've opened up my world
Oh how did you break through

(verse 4)

I don't know what to do
I've never felt this way
When it comes to me and you
I'm taking it day by day

(chorus)

If you could only see
What you do to me
I'm tangled up inside
There's no where I can hide


You make me wanna stay
With every word you say


My love's flowing off the chart...
How did you steal my heart.


(bridge)

It could be right
It could be wrong
But I know it's a ride
I wanna be on


(chorus)

If you could only see
What you do to me
I'm tangled up inside
There's no where I can hide


You make me wanna stay
With every word you say


My love's flowing off the chart...
How did you steal my heart.


Oh baby, oh baby 
How did you steal my heart.

 

 


© 2008 laceyjane23



Author's Note

laceyjane23
please ignore grammar and punctuation errors its a song, about finding love when you least expect it

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oh you never know when you fall to love its life ,its a long road,you never know what you may see,you can be surprised at times you never wanted to be,i always tell my heart,shy away,troubles and pains and breaks ,no not ready for yet,please keep that life running smooth i am through with you,please let me be,this is so nice ,i may come back again and say more for i have lots more to say ,wonderful work ,i know it when it really starts me on great work really

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Finding love when you least expect it is the best way to fall in love. But at the same time it could also be a painful heartache as well. A beautiful poem,(song) I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love the bridge!!!

It could be right
It could be wrong
But I know it's a ride
I wanna be on



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely well written poem/song. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


I like the reminder that love doesn't play by any rules but its own mysterious ways.

"Flowing off the chart" has an interesting double-meaning, as in beyond prior expectation, and as a song in the market. ;-)

Do you have music for this? If so, I'd love to hear it.

Prometheus stole fire from the gods, and love steals your heart -- ain't life fun? ;-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought you did a fantastic job with this one. I was singing along. What great lyrics for a song. I'll look for it on the radio! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was sooooo beautiful and I only thought of one man while reading this. :) Thanks for the request it was really great!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this piece. It shows the feeling of someone who has just been dumbfounded that they are in love. They weren't looking for it.. didn't want it, and most certainly did not expect it. But it is here and how do you deal and how in the world did one get their heart stolen without them knowing in the first place.

A beautiful song.. my only sadness is I can't hear the melody to go with the lyrics. :p

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Posted 9 Years Ago


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oh you never know when you fall to love its life ,its a long road,you never know what you may see,you can be surprised at times you never wanted to be,i always tell my heart,shy away,troubles and pains and breaks ,no not ready for yet,please keep that life running smooth i am through with you,please let me be,this is so nice ,i may come back again and say more for i have lots more to say ,wonderful work ,i know it when it really starts me on great work really

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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laceyjane23
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Well lets see, I am 28 yrs old, and i love to write. I write poetry, lyrics, stories, articles, and I am currently working on my first book, and it has been quite an experience! I love life and I beli.. more..

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