Lover's Dance

Lover's Dance

A by laceyjane23
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A poem about how lover's "dance" their way through life.

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She tango's left,

as he waltz's right.

They dance together,

on this starry night.

 

Her graceful ballet,

leaves him in a daze.

The way that he leads,

guides her through the haze.

 

Hypnotic in rhythm,

two move as one.

They'll dance a thousand dances,

before the night is done.

 

They disco and jive,

through the ups and downs.

They hip and they hop,

between smiles and frowns.

 

As they learn to mambo,

it's all up to chance.

As they glide their way,

through life's lover's dance.

 


© 2008 laceyjane23



Author's Note

laceyjane23
please ignore all grammar and punctuation errors.

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Ohhh...this is so nice :) .
The poem flows well and it seems to create a world of its own.

Wonderful write :) .

A.M.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol cute poem and very true too! :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing! I am in love with this poem! It's very creative, and I can picture two people learning to move together. I just can't say how much I love it! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was completely spectacular!! U wrote it so well! Very awesome and beautiful hehe. I love the colors and the dances and bounces u give it hehe. It reminded me of my dance poem i wrote lol. Great work!

B.A.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. A lovely fun poem.,well written. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 16, 2008

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laceyjane23
laceyjane23

Mesa, AZ



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Well lets see, I am 28 yrs old, and i love to write. I write poetry, lyrics, stories, articles, and I am currently working on my first book, and it has been quite an experience! I love life and I beli.. more..

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