golden boy

 

It is not the sun kissed hair

Or the way your eyes shine,

It is your caring nature and how you dare,

To be so sensitive, sweet, and kind.

I love how you act like who you are

Regardless what people think or say.

It is as if you were my shooting star,

That I wished upon one day.

I love the way your perfect smile,

Makes me laugh when I want to cry.

When you go away for awhile,

My heart is empty and that is no lie.

Everything about you is impeccable, and in line,

I am so glad I met you and so glad you are mine.

Author's Note

I wrote this for my english class about 2 years ago. We were studying Shakespeare, so hence the love sonnet.

Reviews

[Dominic Rosales]

I love it, it is perfect and flawless, no complaints or anything here. Thanks for the submission, I really like this poem. Good job, keep it up

[Salvatore Buttaci]

That's some poem for a young girl to write! I loved it!

[Tanya]

I love it. It seems as if you wrote the poem for a feeling I often have. I love how nicely it flows.

I love the way your perfect smile,
Makes me laugh when I want to cry.

This is exactly how I feel sometimes.
You did a great job....

[L.I. Black]

So sweet.
I really really like it, it makes me feel all warm and fluffy inside lol.