Take a Closer Look

Take a closer look,
into things unseen.
Take a closer look,
into just being.

I hope you find yourself,
amongst the sunlight-living your dream.
I hope learn to love freely
as you dance in the breeze.

And I wish that the breeze
takes you to anywhere you want to go-
lifts you and carries you up-
to a snowfulled mountain or a place that glows.

And I hope that brings you closer to the person-
you are so in love with-
it does not  have to be shown.

Reviews

[Domo]

This seems sweet and promising. It makes inner beauty glow up, and set itself free from the dark side of beauty.
~D♥m♥~

[Sseoni]

What a passionate and beautiful poem! Such emotion that you put into your poems! I enjoy reading your poems due to their uniqueness, beauty, and and emotion! Once again, you have amazed me with yet another one of your wonderful poems! :D

[Aekmy]

"And I wish that the breeze
takes your to anywhere you want to go-
lifts you and carries you up-
to a snowfulled mountain or a place that glows." = (:

This poem of yours reminds me of a song by Jessica Andrews. Great job. (: