My Safe Place

My Safe Place

A Poem by Pointblank
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written for the my safe place contest

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My Safe Place

 

Always there for me

unconditionally

Holds me close and never lets go

Keeps me warm and dry

I can watch T.V.

Eat

Read

Cry

Everyone I love can join me there

Stays very still while I paint my fingers and toes

I think everyone that knows me would agree

My bed is the "safe" place for me

PB  8/30/08

© 2008 Pointblank


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Even as children...In the Bed under the covers always seemed to make you feel safer. Cute poem congratulations!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I really liked the over all feeling of this. Mostly because I can easily relate to it.

It reminds me of when it's storming out side, and all I want to do it sit on my bed and read and talk to friends.

And, in my mind, that's a comforting place to be.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Got to be a woman thing. I like it because I've seem my sisters/wife/daughters/mother also do it. Now me, I'm more a couch person.
LSS

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like the bathroom too!!! Tub full of bubbles and hot water all around me!! Ohhhh, hehe, too much huh? Yeah, my little bed is the same as yours...my silent little partner that accepts me even in my ugliest moments without makeup hahahaha! It doesn't even mind a stray sound or two on it...heehee! Ok...THAT was too much!! Oh forgive me!!! Blessings to you and your bed!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is so cute. I find that whenever I need comfort this is the best place to be.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on August 30, 2008

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