FAKE

Once I was struck by Cupid's stupid arrow

And felt love that took all my loneliness and sorrow

I have loved and felt how is it to be loved

It's like lying on a heart-shaped clouds with a smile in your heart

You've shown the love I long to feel

And made me feel that I am your special dear

To be with you was my everyday wish

To be loved by you was an honor indeed

But the smile in my heart was gone in a blink

It was blown by the wind and flew with it

Intense pain replaced the happiness I felt

'Cause the loved you've shown was FAKE, oh dear

I found out that it was just a good little play

A play that made my heart be in misery

Showing a fake love in a very tricky way

Was like stabbing my heart and threw it away

Reviews

[SJ Mullins]

I think all of us have felt this way at one time or another. It sucks to be in that place which you convey very well. I would take out a before heart-shaped clouds and loved further down should be love; otherwise, great ink! :)

[Cameron]

This was really good. The first two verses give you a sense that the person is happy their in love (which it's meant to, I assume), then inn the last two it you realize that the person is more angry than happy.

On a side not; for some reason I found the picture very humorus. :P