Nonsense

Nonsense

A Poem by LapseOfMind
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Just some nonsense

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This cold winters breath
Has kissed me for my taste
And found me uninviting
Has left me here to waste

I'm chosen over no one
But not forgotten on my cue
Instead I stand, left behind
Haunting but a few

Time is my companion
And we travel without haste
Lazy as we languish
No challenge that we faced

But here I am, I must go
Walk into this too
Alone but not forgotten
Just an ever changing hue

© 2015 LapseOfMind


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One writer's nonsense is another reader's joy. Happy to read that you were in a better place when you wrote this, yet it didn't take away from your piece. You've nearly perfected this style and know exactly the right words to strike the right chords where you realize it or not, and it's a pleasure to read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

7 Years Ago

I'm glad that you enjoyed this one. It really was just some nonsense that me made smile when I wrote.. read more
I really enjoy your style of writing! The last stanza is my favorite, especially the last two lines. You were able to paint a picture and a mood with few words, which is nothing short of amazing. Keep at it! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Well thank you very much, I really appreciate it! I'm glad that you enjoyed it, thank you for taking.. read more
Hey Nick, missed reading you. This is good as usual. I hope you have been well and the new year is treating you kindly so far

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you Cass! The new year has been an intensely positive change! Hope all is well with you as wel.. read more
wow, your writing has blown my mind. your writing is amazing, beautiful, and so well written.
wow..............amazing write and wow

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rose Jaeger Kaneki

8 Years Ago

but I can't tell you what place it is.............yet
LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Lol not knowing breeds excitment
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

8 Years Ago

lol, exactly..........hehehe
your poetry is beautiful because it has a flow a smoothness that cannot be explained but beyond that I can feel this soul there...left behind almost in the shadows and it is said with such finesse. I really can't begin to explain how well done this is.

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I really do appreciate your words and you taking the time to read my work. When.. read more
Have you ever been published? I forsee you becoming the new Walt Whitman or Robert Frost. Your words are so beautiful and they flow in such a rhythm that brings music to my ears. I absolutely love your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Oh wow, thank you very much! Honestly I don't believe I'm even close to comparable to those two lege.. read more
A interesting poem my friend.
"This cold winters breath
Has kissed me for my taste
And found me uninviting
Has left me here to waste "
You made me want to know more. You left open question and changing places. I liked the poem. Made the reader think and ponder. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you for reading! Really, it's just a bunch of nonsense
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Sometime a combination of nonsense is entertaining and you are welcome.
chosen over no one but not forgotten on cue.
Thats a very cold feeling. have some very good lines in here, i enjoyed it man. good job

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
this has a chilling effect throughout, great work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate it!
Fantastic! "Alone, but not forgotten. Just am ever changing hue." I love that.

Posted 8 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

8 Years Ago

Thank you much, glad that you enjoyed it!

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Added on December 28, 2015
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