Lifted

Take it however you will.

Focus

Let me guide you in

Take my hand child

We must begin

Let me tell you of death

And all that lies within

Take a deep breath

And fret not for sin

Now listen carefully

Do not be frightened

What you once knew 

Will soon be enlightened

Death as you knew it

Down on Earth

Was all mistaken

There is no rebirth

No heaven

No hell

No god

No glory

No fairy tales

No gossip

No fake story

Your existence there

Was nothing more

Than a growing mold

Spreading spores

Your life amounted to death

As soon will follow the rest

Before time was kept

And tales were told

This flawless plan

Was meant to unfold

Beyond your control

And beyond mine

The universe permitted

Your fate to untwine

As you lay

Lifeless and cold

Think far beyond

This story told

The dream is over

No longer concealed

Truly exist

Now that all is revealed

Reviews

[clisa]

well - I'm trying figure how to phrase this. If you tell people there is no God, or Reincarnation, or Heaven, but that "all is revealed" in the end, that is basically the end of the movie Contact, but that took a whole book to explain and most people were disappointed with that ending. Listen, huge philosophical topics should be addressed lightly or in depth. This seems a little heavy handed, and a little preachy. Well written - don't get me wrong, but maybe try something lighter next time.

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Hey ! Even i am one poem old on this website but you write far better than me

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nice poem well done keep it up

and DONT FORGET TO REVIEW MY POEM ALSO :D