Carousel

if any of you know me, you will recongnize this as an old piece of mine that was lost in the 'storm'

Hear the Musical chimes' enchantment so sweet

See the frozen yet spirited horses gallop and flow

Take a ride, waste time, oh what a treat

Sounds of Melodious laughter tug me below

Bright lights run and how I want to take a seat

Responsibilities saddle me, schedules trigger my memory as I turn to go

It is for kids anyhow, I say, but my retreating steps don't match my heartbeat

Reviews

[R J Askew]

I like the joy of this and it reminds me of a carousel in France...the second line is my favourite.

[BrightEyes]

I remember this one...I think it was one of the first pieces of yours that I reviewed. I don't remember if the color fonts were there or not....but I like it used here - it adds to the feel of the carousel theme...I enjoyed it on the first post - and that hasnt changed. nicely done.

[Marina]

I love poems like this.
There arn't many.

This is really good.

XxStaySweet,
Rina