Sweet Consuming Homeland

Try to imagine the horrors throughout the years Africans have been through....I don't think I could describe their horrors in the briefness of words....

Africa, do you forget?

Dear Homeland, see I am wasted!

Your militant man was only a boy waving farewell yesterday.

Dust settled upon this devouring mountain,

Africa, will you leave me conquered?

Abandon me not, my homeland!

Reviews

[Tony Hwilka]

Good job And I want to congratulate you in winning 2nd place in the contest. Nice writing.

Tony

[Tovli]

this is fantastic! just fantastic--concise and filled with purpose and belonging. loved it. tovli

[Jason Henry]

short and powerful...great job laura