Egypt

I want to go there

 

 

 

Eagerly waiting to

Go to this faraway land
Yearning to touch its exotic sand

Photograph every inch of this

Tale I will dream of you always without fail

Author's Note

Thanks Tony for the advice!

Reviews

[Rhonda]

Awesome poem. I wanna go there 2.

[Orlando Murcia]

This was a very anxious poem
Like as if you could not wait to touch
it's dusty sands

Another beautiful write

Orlando

[Tony Hwilka]

Great imagery. I have a suggestion you have the sand--ITS SAND. Just my opinion. Well written. Tony

[Bear]

lovely write!! Has me wanting to travel to Scotland but, that a dream I don't expect to come true.

Egypt I'll dream about riding a camel... I don't think I'd survive the high and dry temperatures in Egypt.

Hope you have a good Friday and enjoy your weekend.
Sallie Bear

[Brianna Brie]

Awl, I love the ending of this!! Beautifully written.

[Don Coorough]

You express yearning well, Laura.

[C. C. Burl]

Amazing. Short and powerful, this is the same way I dream about Africa . . . so it really touched me.

[Steven Pottle]

I love the simplicity of this piece- a short statement but with massive intentions...the rest of your wanting and imagination are kept from us so the viewer also begins to imagine/wanting Egypt- I want to go now ;)

[Richard McLin]

The photo and the words go so well together that it is impossible not to love this piece. The words are magic and you spin them very well. There is a lot of mystery to this piece, and it leaves the reader intrigued, and I totally dig that. Great job.

Richard.

[Dionysus Cain]

very well put, to the piont and leave everything else to the imagination.