Twilight's Real Name

Twilight’s sensual silhouette murmurs sweet embracing adieus without being heard

Her aroma clandestine like bloody petals

Windswept across oceans of tear stained feathers

Withering in the iridescent raindrops that only Twilight can succumb to

Whisper visions of depth and star dusted hopes…whisper to her fading image

Thrust bouquets of future desires entwined with a kaleidoscope of blissful dreams to her

Shower her with kisses that lock her to the ground...find out who she really can be

Sweep her doubts away with the tenderness of earthy realness...who is she

Look beyond the silhouette….ah, there she is!

Twilight has another name

 

Reviews

[PianoandPage]

"Whisper visions of depth and star dusted hopes�whisper to her fading image" - nice imagery.

"Sweep her doubts away with the tenderness of earthy realness...who is she
Look beyond the silhouette�.ah, there she is!
Twilight has another name" - great way to end this.

i thought you did a great sort of abstract look at twilight and loved how it could apply to a person, concept, perception, etc etc. you kept it loose and painted with stars.

[alyssa]

VERY WELLL WRITTEN!!!!

[Suki]

wow... thats all i can say... just WOW : D

[Larissa G.]

I can offer no critique for this, because I think it is a stunning and gorgeous piece of work. Just breathtaking.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

This was a nice read. ^^ I love how vivid it was. As RagtagJesus said, "great sort of abstract". ;) Great work!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[....]

This is a beuatiful write
here and heartfelt.
Great imagery, well written.

[Sound]

Very nice. You have a knack for describing nature, and personifying it. Awesome job.

[robert]

Excellent poem ....a painting in words with wonderful metaphors.

[Mimozi]

Beautiful
I love this poem's imagery and subtle sensuality
Twilight is indeed a magical time and I feel you poem really does it justice
Great ending
Loved it.

[poet2angels (lynda)]

I love the ending!

"Twilight has another name"
I love twilight ...My favorite time and even love the word in poetry..
This is lovely as is everything I have read of yours...
TY for entering!

Lynda

[Emily Elizabeth]

This is so hauntingly beautiful, it really captures the mind and soul.
It was so loving and yet there was something deliciously dark about it.
Thanks so much for sharing!