Crossing the Line

She kissed him on the lips and told his wife that she needed a man like him instead of her own husband.......

 

And you don't think that's wrong? 

Reviews

[Gandré]

I don't find this wrong. She was the third in the triangle, and she was not part of their marriage. She can say anything she likes to. It was him, he has to know where he belongs to; so he also could have told her not to kiss him...but he allowed. It just happened. And she is free (the lover, the third one), she is not to blame. H a h a interesting musings of life.

[Barbara Walker]

She is very disrespectful! I take it the husband was taken by surprise. Slap that b***h!

[Susanna F]

Serious disrespect to everyone involved - the wife, the guy she kissed (if he was taken by surprise) and her own husband. Unacceptable.

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[bob, small b. aka invs]

at least she kissed him on the lips and told his wife..... she could have done it in private and kept it a secret.

[Charles D. Moorer]

I am still reeling from your poem "Divorce." This it seems to me is a continuation of that piece. I am tempted to say move on, but it is obvious that the anger and pain are still too raw and too present.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh that is very wrong and down right nasty... Damn!!