Crossing the Line

Crossing the Line

A Story by Laura E. Aranda

She kissed him on the lips and told his wife that she needed a man like him instead of her own husband.......

 

And you don't think that's wrong? 


© 2011 Laura E. Aranda



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I don't find this wrong. She was the third in the triangle, and she was not part of their marriage. She can say anything she likes to. It was him, he has to know where he belongs to; so he also could have told her not to kiss him...but he allowed. It just happened. And she is free (the lover, the third one), she is not to blame. H a h a interesting musings of life.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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She is very disrespectful! I take it the husband was taken by surprise. Slap that b***h!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serious disrespect to everyone involved - the wife, the guy she kissed (if he was taken by surprise) and her own husband. Unacceptable.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


at least she kissed him on the lips and told his wife..... she could have done it in private and kept it a secret.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't find this wrong. She was the third in the triangle, and she was not part of their marriage. She can say anything she likes to. It was him, he has to know where he belongs to; so he also could have told her not to kiss him...but he allowed. It just happened. And she is free (the lover, the third one), she is not to blame. H a h a interesting musings of life.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am still reeling from your poem "Divorce." This it seems to me is a continuation of that piece. I am tempted to say move on, but it is obvious that the anger and pain are still too raw and too present.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh that is very wrong and down right nasty... Damn!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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