Fly Free

Fly Free

A Poem by Cherry Chapstick

I can say it
One thousand times
I can see it
Right through your eyes
I can whisper it
And still it's heard
I cannot let it go
Oh my wings 
Are white as snow. 

You make me laugh and
I know I can 
Freely laugh with you
Cos you understand
I can tell you what
I want to say
I don't have to wait
Another day.

Cos I can fly
And no one catches me
Cos I don't fall
Ohhhh can't you see
That I need you
Or else I just can't breath
Ohhhh I need you 
I need you here with me
Or else I just can't breath
I want you next to me
So I can just
Be Me. 

The wind may blow and
The hail might fly 
But I can see that
I'm in your mind
I don't care what
They all might think
You are the pen
I am the ink
And even though my words,
They represent
Only a fraction of
My heart's content 
I want to tell you that
I love you and
Then you should say that
I need you and--

I need you.
I need you. 
Do you need me?


Cos I can fly
And no one catches me
Cos I don't fall
Ohhhh can't you see
That I need you
Or else I just can't breath
Ohhhh I need you 
I need you here with me
Or else I just can't breath
I want you next to me
So I can just
Be Me. 




© 2010 Cherry Chapstick



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Thanks for the reviews, and it is a song. These are the lyrics. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is really good :) I can relate :) I like the short lines, they make this a really easy read, it would probably sound so cool as a song! :) Good job! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is another wonderful piece. Lyrics, maybe? I liked how you used "You are the pen, I am the ink". It's a great metaphor, showing how close you feel to that person, how you feel without them the world will suddenly stop turning. It's beautiful, but I would have chosen a different title.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Tags: white, wings, relief, flying, being me, love

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Cherry Chapstick
Cherry Chapstick

Quebec, Canada



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