Surte America

playing around with sentence and phrase structure.

the town …

 

awakened…

 

to a humidity…

 

laced sun-rising...

 

unequivocally belying…

 

enchantment,

 

of the...

 

desert saquaro cactus landscape.

 

Reviews

[Ashley.M.E]

A short but imaginative poem, I happen to like the picture I gotten well reading this.

[Stephanie Slayer]

Oh I love it

[Desert Dreamer]

I can feel the desert heat and humidity in recent days, the timing of your poem is perfect. The rain is on its way.

[Chris]

Twists and twists and turns...

Rolls well off the tongue.

Take care,
Chris

[Kat Collins]

Imagery is so powerful! My kind of writing...achingly brief, but a kalidescope of scenes. Each line breathed into a master of its own to create a stunning landscape. Brilliant.

[An owl on the moon]

This just breathes the world to life, a desert enchantment to be sure!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Crafted so well, a vision of a desert came to my eyes!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

once again you have transported me to a place I have never seen with my own eyes.....wonderfully penned.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you word paint a most blissful scenery~

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing words and photo. I like the landscape of the desert. Can create a peace to a man lost in confusion. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote